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    Choose Me—Chapter 1

    Story written on October 20, 2021 by Rayne.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=111976
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    I need a minute so I sit down on the sofa and gather myself and I didn’t notice a hand on my shoulder until it gently shook me. I look up to see Laura and Ben right behind her “Tina flew out the room looking visibly upset and locked herself in the bathroom.  She told

    I need a minute so I sit down on the sofa and gather myself and I didn’t notice a hand on my shoulder until it gently shook me. I look up to see Laura and Ben right behind her

    “Tina flew out the room looking visibly upset and locked herself in the bathroom.  She told Ben to go away”

    I sigh “Yeah..Well she knows now.  I told her I couldn’t be her maid of honor if she wasn’t marrying the love of her life and I couldn’t stand by watching the love of mine marry someone else”. I start to feel the tears well up

    “I think I lost her” I barely squeak out and lay my head on Laura’s chest fighting the tears from trying to spill out

    Tina’s POV

    I’m so upset I’m shaking and I’m staring at myself in the mirror.  I never knew she felt like that. I mean she never once told me how she felt.  I don’t even know what I’m feeling but fuck I’m engaged to Nathan and I’m going to marry him with or without her standing by my side.  She can’t just spring that heavy revelation on me and expect me to be ok with it….especially tonight of all nights.

    I take a few deep breath and try to make myself presentable again.  I need to go back to Nathan and focus on him.  But why does everything in me want to go after Bette.  I’m angry she waited so long to tell me.  She never gave me a hint….or did she and I was just oblivious to it..I admit I pushed my feelings for her so far down I forgot how I felt about her for a long time but now after her confession she managed to dig up all of those feelings I chose to bury and all I can think of now is that I am making the biggest mistake of my life

    “Tina!…Are you in there?..Are you ok?”  I hear Nathan say.  The knocking on the door and voice startled me out of my thoughts

    “Yeah babe..I’ll be right out.  Just had to splash some water on my face”

    “Ok..As long as you are ok..We were getting worried” I hear him step away from the door

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      • I completely understand that Bibi. There are a lot of unfinished stories on here and I’m sure the authors never intend to leave them unfinished as I have done this as well but since I couldn’t get into my other account for a long time I wanted to finish them but decided not too and refocused on new stories so this is where I am at… So if you don’t want to invest your time I completely understand but I do hope you follow.

        I appreciate your comment and hope you follow. I am invested in my two stories and plan to complete them

        • I strongly agree with Bibi. So many good stories have had untimely deaths which have left me and others extremely disappointed. I know about writers block but if the writer can’t finish the story perhaps it should be deleted. They’re no different than the cliffhanger that Marja left us on the show. I am hesitant to invest myself in a story that leaves me at a precipice. I won’t name them but I don’t understand why the writers start a new story but do not finish the story that have already put out here.. it boggles my mind. Strange thing is that they put “tbc” at the end of a chapter but it never happens. All I want is closure in one form or another. Thank you for hearing me out.

          • Jane I completely agree with you. As readers it is frustrating and as far as authors lives can happen but yes if I story does not intend to be completed then it should be taken down as not to give the reader hope it will be continued.

            I guess I can only say as an author I want to complete the two stories I have going. And it is my goal to do that. I did not finish my others and took them off because it was hard to put my head back to them and I did delete them. I do not intend to bring those back.

            Thank you for your comment and expressing your feelings on the matter. Hopefully you will read mine once they are complete. And that goes for anyone that wants to wait until they see a final chapter. I have no problem with that….But I also welcome feedback if you would like to contribute

            Thank you Jane!

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