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    Choose Me—Chapter 1

    Story written on October 20, 2021 by Rayne.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=111976
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    “Are you marrying the love of your life?” I want her to answer right away and to my shock and surprise she hesitates. I give her a puzzling look “Why did you hesitate?” I ask as I can see Tina get flustered and I know her so well. When she gets flustered she is struggling

    “Are you marrying the love of your life?”

    I want her to answer right away and to my shock and surprise she hesitates.

    I give her a puzzling look “Why did you hesitate?” I ask as I can see Tina get flustered and I know her so well. When she gets flustered she is struggling internally with her answer

    “Uh…I…uh…I am sorry I was thrown  off by the question.  I wasn’t expecting that”

    “You sure that’s all it is because if you are thinking you are making a mistake please don’t do this”

    “I’m not making a mistake!..I love Nathan.  He is the love of my life and I want to spend the rest of my life with him!” She says rather forcefully and I am not sure if she is trying to convince me…….or herself”

    With a sudden surge of confidence, I prepare to let her know how I feel…this is now or never for me as I think there is a crack in this union and if can just squeeze my way into this crack  then maybe…just maybe… I can get her to see that the love of her life might be standing right in front of her face.  I take a step toward her and I can see her resolve crumbling when I am a mere inch from her.  I can actually feel the heat radiating off of her body.  I look her in the eyes searching them intently and I see doubt.  I smile at her lovingly

    “I don’t believe you Tina” I say softly and move a strand of her gorgeous blond hair behind her ear..she doesn’t move or say a word “….Because you are here in a closed room with me at your own engagement party instead of being by your fiancé’s side..If he is your one true love and there is no one else that can take that title in your heart then walk out of here now and go ask Ben to be your best person because I refuse to stand by and watch the love of my life marry someone else”

    Ok I have said my peace and the cards are laid out on the table.  I may have just fucked up my whole lifeline but I couldn’t lie to myself… Before I could even turn around., Tina stormed out of the room leaving me standing there..I hope she just won’t walk completely out of my life.

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      • I completely understand that Bibi. There are a lot of unfinished stories on here and I’m sure the authors never intend to leave them unfinished as I have done this as well but since I couldn’t get into my other account for a long time I wanted to finish them but decided not too and refocused on new stories so this is where I am at… So if you don’t want to invest your time I completely understand but I do hope you follow.

        I appreciate your comment and hope you follow. I am invested in my two stories and plan to complete them

        • I strongly agree with Bibi. So many good stories have had untimely deaths which have left me and others extremely disappointed. I know about writers block but if the writer can’t finish the story perhaps it should be deleted. They’re no different than the cliffhanger that Marja left us on the show. I am hesitant to invest myself in a story that leaves me at a precipice. I won’t name them but I don’t understand why the writers start a new story but do not finish the story that have already put out here.. it boggles my mind. Strange thing is that they put “tbc” at the end of a chapter but it never happens. All I want is closure in one form or another. Thank you for hearing me out.

          • Jane I completely agree with you. As readers it is frustrating and as far as authors lives can happen but yes if I story does not intend to be completed then it should be taken down as not to give the reader hope it will be continued.

            I guess I can only say as an author I want to complete the two stories I have going. And it is my goal to do that. I did not finish my others and took them off because it was hard to put my head back to them and I did delete them. I do not intend to bring those back.

            Thank you for your comment and expressing your feelings on the matter. Hopefully you will read mine once they are complete. And that goes for anyone that wants to wait until they see a final chapter. I have no problem with that….But I also welcome feedback if you would like to contribute

            Thank you Jane!

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