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    Closure

    Story written on November 26, 2007 by MaGoose.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=67651
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    Aftermath of the Danish breakup.

     

    Shane gestured to the seat next to her.  Luckily, it was also the seat furthest away from Dana.

     

    “How are you doing today, Alice?”  Tina asked to try and break the ice.

     

    Alice took a deep breath.  “I’m doing well.  Thanks.”  She took another deep breath and was about to start into her reason for being there when a familiar voice broke in.

     

    “Alice?  Can I get you anything?”  Lara queried.  Dana had told Lara about this meeting and it made her extremely nervous.  Lara wanted Dana to know she was nearby, if needed.

     

    Alice shocked everyone when she looked up at Lara and simply and civilly replied:  “No, thank you, Lara.  I won’t be staying long.”

     

    Dana and Lara passed a quick look and then Lara said “OK.  Just call one of us over if you need anything.”

     

    Alice looked around the table and noticed that the expressions were a tiny bit more welcoming.  It seems that her friends had noticed some difference over the last time they had seen her.

     

    Alice started again.  “I’m sorry.  I realize I went more than a little crazy and it impacted all of you in ways I regret deeply.”

     

    Tina reached over and held Alice hand.  Alice gave a quick squeeze of thanks and let go.

     

    “Dana?”  Alice looked directly at Dana for the first time that day.  Dana was amazed to see Alice in those eyes – not the clouded over eyes from the last encounter they had.

     

    “Yes?”  She asked warily and  bit hopefully.

     

    “I hurt you most of all.”  Dana attempted to interrupt.  “Please.  Let me finish.  I know I don’t have a right to ask anything of you, but, please let me finish.”  Dana nodded her acceptance.

     

    “I could place the blame in many different ways but it all falls back on me.  It was my insecurities that broke us up and my lack of strength that caused me to fall into the pills and crazy behavior.”

     

    Dana made another move to speak up.

     

    “Dane.”  Alice gave a small smile and bit her lower lip.  “Seriously.  Let me get this out.  I know you have you own viewpoint on what happened but I don’t know that I am ready for that discussion.  It may not be fair, but, it is what I am capable of right now.”

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    3. MaGoose, I am thrilled to see your story and impressed by your courage to write. Overtime, I have read the comments you left on different Danish stories and found you insightful. As proven here in this first chapter of “Closure”, you have demonstrated that your ability to describe A’s feeling beautifully. I am especially touched reading page 3 and sympathize deeply for A. There is no reason for you to doubt the delivery of this story and I am positive that you will give us an awesome story. Looking forward to many many more updates. Thank you. p.s. I totally agree with HF’s comment.

    7. I’m SO sorry I didn’t comment on this sooner. I love it, although I think the group owes Alice an apology for the way they treated her just as much as she owes them one. I really hated the group in the beginning of Season 3. I know it was a tough situation, but you don’t treat your friend, who obviously needs professional help, like a nuisance and a joke. But that has nothing to do with your story, sorry! Lol. This is awesome, I’d love it if you continued. I want to know how the group reacts to Alice’s self-punishment, and I hope she sees that she really doesn’t need to feel that way. I’ve felt like that before and it breaks my heart, so you have to continue and give it a happy ending, okay? This is a great start.

    9. this totally don’t suck at all. It’s great, this is a really good start. I’ve always been a Dana fan and i know I always will but D wasn’t really good to Alice when she was on pills. Al went a bit crazy yes but she could’ve done something. Anyway, this is good. I hope to see an update soon. thanks :D

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