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Closure – Chapter 2
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Dana could still remember when life was simple. She was safely closeted and making strides with her tennis career. Then Alice Pieszecki entered her life and simple went out the window.
Dana could not look back and miss it. She felt she finally came alive under the love and support of her friends. It was like life was suddenly in color after living in black and white. As much as her friends may tease her on her naiveté, she knew she was safe with them.
She was safe with her friends but she felt like she was home with Alice. They had an amazing friendship. Maybe it was their different backgrounds and personalities that made them mesh so well. Dana was inexperienced in pretty much every aspect of her life except for tennis. Dana knew that Alice was always there for her for any help she might need – even when she didn’t know she needed it.
Dana thanked the heavens every day for Alice and that 4 AM kiss. She still had occasional nightmares of life with Tonya if they had gotten married and it was not pretty.
Dana always loved Alice. How could she not? Alice was cute, smart, confident, funny, and sexy as hell. She never had any idea that Alice might have the same feelings for her.
The relationship that followed was life-changing. Dana never thought she would find someone who was her soul mate. It was intense and wonderful and it scared Dana to death. She couldn’t grasp the amount of love Alice had for her. She loved Alice. She knew she did. She might not be as vocal about it, but, she never lost that love. And then she ran away from it.
Lara was a convenient exit. She did still have feelings for Lara and really enjoyed the flirting and attention from the “soup” chef. Dana could see that it was driving Alice to fear for the future of their relationship.
After Angelica was born, things went rapidly downhill. Alice became clingier and Dana responded to that by pushing further away from her and closer to Lara. It continued to cycle and gave Dana the perfect excuse to run away. It also gave her the perfect safety net of another relationship to fall into.
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i have a feeling this is going to be a long bummpy road, but i am looking forward to it, because i know in the end we all love happy danish :). Great job, keep it up, pps.
MaGoose, I can totally relate to your nervousness. Just last night when I started reading “Posthumous Wisdom”, I found my heart pounding heavily all the way till the end of page 2 and I am just a reader. I can only imagine what you writers go through every time you submit a post. Back to the story, “”closure” is a dish best served warm,” clever! I love how you showed us D’s thoughts. I feel bad that A being all alone and lost her KCRW job. Maybe when she got her life back, there would be a better offer. One of the reasons I like A so much is “Alice would have been the first to track the person down and drag them back to the family.” She was everything one would want as a loyal and caring friend. I too hope D would find her way back to A soon. Can’t wait to read more. Great Job! Thanks!
I’m loving this story. I especially like how you wrote from Dana’s POV. She is my favorite character. I can’t wait to find out what’s going on with Alice. Post soon this is a great story.
I love Dana. but don’t make it too easy for her heheheh this is great. Hope to see you post soon :D
Get them back together! Please dear God! Keep the love alive.
Awsome post!!! Please continue, I like how you put in Dana’s point of view of the whole thing. Can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
great job..so sweet i feel a little sorry for dana in this chap hmm very interested for whats coming can’t wait :)
Magoose. It was so nice what you said about me. You one of my very avid readers, who’s comments are held in high regard. I love your story. I love DANISH. keep up the amazing work.