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Closure – Chapter 13
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She had a little money saved up. Maybe she could leave. But she wasn’t sure Jackie wouldn’t just find her. It would be worse if she left and Jackie found her than if she just went back. Jackie hurt her pretty badly this time. Surely she wouldn’t do it again? Maybe Alice could use this incident to get Jackie to talk about maybe getting some counseling. Alice had been scared to bring it up before, but, guessed that Jackie might feel guilty enough by this latest episode that she might not get too mad.
Alice wished that she knew where her relationship with Dana stood right now. It seemed like they were still friends, right? Why else would she have come looking for her. And she was so sweet and caring to her last night. Alice thought that she slept so well, even with the soreness in her body, because she knew Dana would keep her safe. She really had no right to expect Dana to help her, though. Alice had screwed up pretty badly with all her friends and it was up to her to take care of herself. Much like she has all her life.
OK. Almost to the bathroom. Alice needed a rest when she got there. She sat for a few minutes on the toilet lid before reaching over and starting the shower to get the water warmed up.
Dana had laid out some extra fluffy towels and even had some of Alice’s shampoo in the shower. Alice idly wondered if it was leftover or something Dana had bought recently.
She eased up and got undressed. The pajamas were loose and easy to take off — thank goodness. She intentionally did not look closely at her body. The pain was bad enough. Seeing the bruises would make it too real.
Alice stepped into the shower and let the warm water ease the aches she felt. After a few minutes Alice was limber enough to wash her hair (gently — even her scalp hurt) and get the rest of her body cleaned up.
She got out of the shower and took another rest on the toilet seat with a fluffy towel around her.
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Dana+her boxing training=DEAD BITCH. Jackie should pick on someone her own size. Poor poor AL. WOOT PROTECTIVE D. I love the idea. Great job Magoose. My internet is still on the fritz. I’m at work right now.
Another great chapter. I love that Dana is in such a good place that she is not rising to any of the bait Alice is throwing her way to try and put her off. I am feeling safe in the knowledge that you have the gang downstairs waiting and you will protect Al. Can’t wait to read the intervention. Thanks for posting!
No, no – she cannot leave – the gang have to persuade her it is in her interest to leave that horrible, abusive woman. Well done on keeping us gripped. More soon please.
I definitely would’ve done it the same way. If a friend of mine was in this situation, I’d be more prepared than a squad of Boy Scouts with OCD. You really did good with Alice’s behavior. She just got hurt over a simple talk with her ex, Dana, and now she’s jumping to make sure that her abuser doesn’t get mad again. You really did give Jackie a good hold on her. I’m with mariam on this: Give Alice her freedom for this Christmas. More than that, give her the love that still exists with Dana. Bring their love back to life.
Love the caring Dana!!!! Please dont let her leave,she is safe with Dana and her friends! Thanks again for the great update! PPS
Lets get the whole gang going,Alice was good at the intervention,lets see if she likes the receiving end of one. First the Dr. them the police. Get Jackie in jail before the gang,gives her a real old fashion woodshed whoppin. thanks
amazing chap, really want to beat J down now after the first page. The gangs going to need to handle the intervention delicately since Al is in a very fragile place right now….Great job!!!!
Hoooooo no, I am not first lol. Never mind. PPS
First?????? That is a premiere lol. Ok, MaGoose, please it is Christmas, don’t let one of our girl’s abused like that. come on give me her freedom as a christmas present I am waiting lol
Oh yay first. Intervention. ASAP. there’s no way she should leave that house and get back with Jackie. This is really good Magoose. I like protective Dana. I like her goofiness and everything. Thanks for this chapter, looking forward to more :)
Interventnion time bring it on, great cahpter!! :)
=0 INTERVENTION!! YAY! Of course I still like your story, its totally original and greatly written. Poor Alice all the things that Dana has done for her to keep her safe =) thanks for the update! PPS!
Awww don’t let her leave!! You can’t let Alice get hurt more than she’s already been. Please let her let her friends help her? And no I didn’t mistype that, lol. I’m in love with a fictional character, how sad is that? Please let her come to her senses, and let the others help her! I’m addicted to this story, it’s awesome, and so are you for writing it. I’m sure it has to be tough; there aren’t many stories that deal with abuse on this site. Big hugs for doing this, I think it’s definitely a scenario everyone needs to see. You rule my dear.
MaGoose, Great Chapter and teriffic story! Your description of the abuse and chacters reactions are perfect! I love protective Dana and I hope the intervention works. But I’ve studied DV enough to know the 1st invervention may have an impact but is likely to not be successful. The emotional abuse sadly is generally much worse than the physical abuse and is why the person repeatedly returns to the abuser. Regardless of how the interventions goes I just hope eventually Alice is free from Jackie and happy and not freed tragically. PPS! :D
I have my baseball bat all ready, Geeze there is no way that Alice should go near that woman . I have no problem with anyone you want to write giving that Jackie some serious bitch slaps. Great story and so well done , its also so sad but I love to see when true friends rally around. PPS