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Closure – Chapter 14
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Alice walked slowly towards the living room. As much as she didn’t want Dana to see her in pain there really was a limit to how much she could handle. Dana, for her part, had to fight off a primitive urge to pick her up, put her back in bed, and pamper her senseless. Dana took a deep breath for the confrontation ahead.
Alice stopped abruptly when she saw Bette, Tina and Shane in the living room. She recovered quickly.
“Hi, guys! Long time no see…” Her greeting was met with strained smiles.
Bette was intentionally staying back. She was concerned about Alice’s reaction to her yesterday and did not want to do anything to upset her.
Tina said “Why don’t you come and sit down? We were just visiting.” Alice knew that was unlikely, but, could not figure out what was going on.
“Sorry, Tina, but I really need to get going. Did you guys see my cell anywhere?” Alice was looking at the end tables and shelves.
The girls could tell how gingerly Alice was walking around and could only imagine the pain she must be in. It only further strengthened their resolve to get her out of this relationship.
“Just please sit for a little bit. We really need to talk to you.” Tina tried again to get the writer to sit.
“No. Really. I have to go. I’m not sure what you guys are up to, but, I don’t have time for it today.”
This was killing Shane. She decided to cut through the crap.
Shane walked over to Alice and laid a hand gently on her arm. “Alice. Dana told us what is going on. We are here for you. We weren’t there before when you needed help, but, we are here now and we plan to stay by you.”
“I don’t know what you are talking about.” Dana could see Alice was getting agitated and went to move between her and the door. Bette made the same move to place herself in position to block the back door. By no means did they want to get physical with Alice, but, they might have to in order to keep her from leaving.
Tina said “Alice? Can you tell us what happened with your back?”
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Im so glad everyone is there for Al,i hope they can protect her from that evil woman. Have i told you i love ur story? well I LOVE IT!!! Thanks and PPS
Oh Happy Holidays too sweety.
Its not over, Jackie will be out looking for Alice. She will visit each one of them or stake out their homes. Once you have someone you can control,you don’t want to let them get away. Once an abuser always one. I hope the first house that she goes to Is Bette and Tinas. Dont want the girls to become abuser,but Jackie had better watch her back. The Drs.and the Police. The should happen to any living thing thanks
Impressive. Nothing’s stronger than the power of love. And when it comes to Alice, these women are more dangerous than a mother cougar protecting her young. In the name of the love they once had, give Danish the chance to make things come back together.
the first step has been taken, now the family needs to keep suporting her through the next ones, so she doesn’t backslide when the bitch shows up being all apologetic (then J will go off on all of them for taking Al away….hold onto that shotgun Haruka) Superbly written!!!!
Another great chapter in this amazing story. It’s going to be a difficult journey ahead for Alice, but she is in good hands…both yours and Dana’s! Thanks for posting.
Hey nice update don’t rush post when you can. i’m happy the gang was able to stop alice. now they need to put their plans into action and please, please let one of them run into jackie,lol okay i love drama but jackie needs a arse whippin’… the question is who will do it! happy holidays!
“We’re save now. I just happen to have bought a shoot gun while you were sleeping.” New jackie death way for this chapter. Sorry Magoose you made it to tempting to want to kill the BITCH.Anyway. I love you and the story. Keep it up.
Awww, my poor, poor Alice. At least she’s got the gang to watch over her. Kit needs to make an appearance as Foxy Brown and whoop this Jackie bitch’s ass. Actually, that’d be more than awesome. And you’re right, Al’s reactions are totally honest for the situation…makes me worry a little about what you’ve been through yourself, it’s so accurate. I absolutely adore this and can’t wait to read more, but I’m really impatient, so don’t push yourself. Enjoy your holiday, we’ll all be here when you get back. Hugs dear.
This story is really getting good! Thank god they stopped Alice from going back to that Jackie Biatch!!! Please post soon! Oh, and Pleasssse bring DANISH back!
I was a little unsure if Alice would let the gang take care of her, I’m glad she’s seeing it now. This is awesome magoose, I totally love it. :)
Poor Alice. The gang loves you and will take care of you. Alice deserves better. nobody deserved to be abused at all. thank you to end Alice pain. Hope her return to her friends is definite. Welcome back Alice. Watch your back jackie you will pay what you’ve done to Alice. Great story please PPS
EUREKA! We have contact! Poor Alice =( i’m glad she’s letting them help her, but we all know they’ve still got Jackie to deal with. I say some lesbian turkish oil wrestling is in order don’t you??? Thanks for a great post! PPS!
im totally loving this and am completely hooked. keep it up!