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Closure – Chapter 14
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Alice’s face went white. “N-n-nothing. I slipped and fell.”
Dana said “I saw the mark on your back. Honey, I know that wasn’t made by falling down.”
Alice exploded. “What the fuck do you guys know!?!” She poked Shane with a finger. “That’s right, Shane!” She said with disgust “You weren’t there! I had lost myself — in the drugs and depression. And my “friends”… Friends that I had for years, friends that I thought would always be there… None of you cared enough to try to help!” Alice’s voice broke “I was too much trouble.”
The gang was stunned at Alice’s outburst. They were also ashamed that there was some truth to what she said. They were all too busy to see what Alice was going through and try to help. She had to do that on her own.
“You guys weren’t there, but, Jackie was. She took care of me. She made me feel important to someone. You guys never gave me a second thought! What the hell makes you think I need you now?”
“Alice! We thought of you every day. We tried to call, we tried to visit — you weren’t around.” Bette said and then she bowed her head embarrassedly. “We thought you didn’t want to be found. We should have tried harder, but, we *never* forgot about you.”
“Bullshit! I was around. Sure, I was at Jackie’s most of the time, but, you could have contacted me. I mean… I did answer your e-mails.”
“With one or two lines that said nothing. You had asked for us to give you time and we thought we were.” Bette said.
Alice was trying desperately to hold on to what she thought had been true over the past three months. “No. Jackie was right: you guys did not want me in your lives anymore. I was too much of a problem. But she wanted me. She wants me. She thinks I am special. She took me to Hawaii for my birthday. Did you guys even remember it?”
“Alice, sweetie, we all sent you cards and gifts on your birthday.” Alice saw the truth in Tina’s eyes. Alice tried to explain the discrepancy “They probably got misplaced or something…”
Bette said “Alice. Think about it. I know this is very hard, but, Jackie has been controlling you and controlling your relationship to keep you with her.”
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Im so glad everyone is there for Al,i hope they can protect her from that evil woman. Have i told you i love ur story? well I LOVE IT!!! Thanks and PPS
Oh Happy Holidays too sweety.
Its not over, Jackie will be out looking for Alice. She will visit each one of them or stake out their homes. Once you have someone you can control,you don’t want to let them get away. Once an abuser always one. I hope the first house that she goes to Is Bette and Tinas. Dont want the girls to become abuser,but Jackie had better watch her back. The Drs.and the Police. The should happen to any living thing thanks
Impressive. Nothing’s stronger than the power of love. And when it comes to Alice, these women are more dangerous than a mother cougar protecting her young. In the name of the love they once had, give Danish the chance to make things come back together.
the first step has been taken, now the family needs to keep suporting her through the next ones, so she doesn’t backslide when the bitch shows up being all apologetic (then J will go off on all of them for taking Al away….hold onto that shotgun Haruka) Superbly written!!!!
Another great chapter in this amazing story. It’s going to be a difficult journey ahead for Alice, but she is in good hands…both yours and Dana’s! Thanks for posting.
Hey nice update don’t rush post when you can. i’m happy the gang was able to stop alice. now they need to put their plans into action and please, please let one of them run into jackie,lol okay i love drama but jackie needs a arse whippin’… the question is who will do it! happy holidays!
“We’re save now. I just happen to have bought a shoot gun while you were sleeping.” New jackie death way for this chapter. Sorry Magoose you made it to tempting to want to kill the BITCH.Anyway. I love you and the story. Keep it up.
Awww, my poor, poor Alice. At least she’s got the gang to watch over her. Kit needs to make an appearance as Foxy Brown and whoop this Jackie bitch’s ass. Actually, that’d be more than awesome. And you’re right, Al’s reactions are totally honest for the situation…makes me worry a little about what you’ve been through yourself, it’s so accurate. I absolutely adore this and can’t wait to read more, but I’m really impatient, so don’t push yourself. Enjoy your holiday, we’ll all be here when you get back. Hugs dear.
This story is really getting good! Thank god they stopped Alice from going back to that Jackie Biatch!!! Please post soon! Oh, and Pleasssse bring DANISH back!
I was a little unsure if Alice would let the gang take care of her, I’m glad she’s seeing it now. This is awesome magoose, I totally love it. :)
Poor Alice. The gang loves you and will take care of you. Alice deserves better. nobody deserved to be abused at all. thank you to end Alice pain. Hope her return to her friends is definite. Welcome back Alice. Watch your back jackie you will pay what you’ve done to Alice. Great story please PPS
EUREKA! We have contact! Poor Alice =( i’m glad she’s letting them help her, but we all know they’ve still got Jackie to deal with. I say some lesbian turkish oil wrestling is in order don’t you??? Thanks for a great post! PPS!
im totally loving this and am completely hooked. keep it up!