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Closure – Chapter 14
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“Controlling me, Bette? How? By giving me anything I want? By telling me every day that I mean the world to her? By giving me her time and attention?”
“No, Alice.” Bette said softly while looking her right in the eyes. “By isolating you from your friends. By changing who you are. By hurting you.”
Alice flinched and turned away from Bette.
Shane spoke up “The abuse won’t stop. I’ve seen it before. It will just continue to escalate.” Alice started to say something back and then just dropped her head down when she realized the truth of Shane’s words. Things had progressed from a bruise on her arm to a welt across her back…and more. She was so tired. She was in pain and exhausted and just wanted to crawl into a hole.
Dana sensed they were close to a breakthrough.
“Jackie takes care of me.” Alice stated plainly.
“No, Al. No she doesn’t.” Dana said passionately. “Someone that loves you should never, ever hurt you. I know you know that or you wouldn’t have run away from her last night. We just need for you to agree that this thing with her needs to end. We’ll be your strength. I know we let you down and believe me it will not happen again. We all had a chance to experience life without you and we don’t want to do that again.”
Alice absorbed this and sank down onto the sofa. “God, you all must think I’m so stupid…” Alice started softly crying with her head in her hands.
Each of the girls immediately went to her to hold her in some way so she could feel the love they all had for her. Tina spoke up. “We are the stupid ones. We should have never allowed you to leave ours lives.”
The crying tapered off and Alice was given a tissue by Dana, who smiled encouragingly. “So. What do I do now?”
You could feel the tension in the girls evaporate. They had crossed this first hurdle. There would be more to come, but, this was the required first step.
Bette grinned and said as she walked towards the kitchen “Well, first let’s get you a cup of coffee and something to eat.”
“OK” Alice said resignedly while she rested her head on the back of the sofa. Dana sat next to her and wrapped her in her arms.
“Don’t worry, Al. We’ve got you now. You’re safe.”
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Im so glad everyone is there for Al,i hope they can protect her from that evil woman. Have i told you i love ur story? well I LOVE IT!!! Thanks and PPS
Oh Happy Holidays too sweety.
Its not over, Jackie will be out looking for Alice. She will visit each one of them or stake out their homes. Once you have someone you can control,you don’t want to let them get away. Once an abuser always one. I hope the first house that she goes to Is Bette and Tinas. Dont want the girls to become abuser,but Jackie had better watch her back. The Drs.and the Police. The should happen to any living thing thanks
Impressive. Nothing’s stronger than the power of love. And when it comes to Alice, these women are more dangerous than a mother cougar protecting her young. In the name of the love they once had, give Danish the chance to make things come back together.
the first step has been taken, now the family needs to keep suporting her through the next ones, so she doesn’t backslide when the bitch shows up being all apologetic (then J will go off on all of them for taking Al away….hold onto that shotgun Haruka) Superbly written!!!!
Another great chapter in this amazing story. It’s going to be a difficult journey ahead for Alice, but she is in good hands…both yours and Dana’s! Thanks for posting.
Hey nice update don’t rush post when you can. i’m happy the gang was able to stop alice. now they need to put their plans into action and please, please let one of them run into jackie,lol okay i love drama but jackie needs a arse whippin’… the question is who will do it! happy holidays!
“We’re save now. I just happen to have bought a shoot gun while you were sleeping.” New jackie death way for this chapter. Sorry Magoose you made it to tempting to want to kill the BITCH.Anyway. I love you and the story. Keep it up.
Awww, my poor, poor Alice. At least she’s got the gang to watch over her. Kit needs to make an appearance as Foxy Brown and whoop this Jackie bitch’s ass. Actually, that’d be more than awesome. And you’re right, Al’s reactions are totally honest for the situation…makes me worry a little about what you’ve been through yourself, it’s so accurate. I absolutely adore this and can’t wait to read more, but I’m really impatient, so don’t push yourself. Enjoy your holiday, we’ll all be here when you get back. Hugs dear.
This story is really getting good! Thank god they stopped Alice from going back to that Jackie Biatch!!! Please post soon! Oh, and Pleasssse bring DANISH back!
I was a little unsure if Alice would let the gang take care of her, I’m glad she’s seeing it now. This is awesome magoose, I totally love it. :)
Poor Alice. The gang loves you and will take care of you. Alice deserves better. nobody deserved to be abused at all. thank you to end Alice pain. Hope her return to her friends is definite. Welcome back Alice. Watch your back jackie you will pay what you’ve done to Alice. Great story please PPS
EUREKA! We have contact! Poor Alice =( i’m glad she’s letting them help her, but we all know they’ve still got Jackie to deal with. I say some lesbian turkish oil wrestling is in order don’t you??? Thanks for a great post! PPS!
im totally loving this and am completely hooked. keep it up!