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Closure – Chapter 3
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Just then the front door opened and a woman walked in and straight up to Alice.
“What’s up, babe?” She said as she looked Shane up and down while putting an arm possessively around Alice’s waist. “I had to park the car since it was taking so long. I thought you said this place had quick service?”
Shane took a moment to size up this new person. She was a bit taller than Alice and in obviously very good shape. Her figure was accentuated by the very well-tailored suit that she wore. She had short, platinum blond hair and piercing blue eyes that did not have a hint of warmth as she stared Shane down.
“God, Jackie… I am so sorry! I was about to come out and I ran into an old friend. We can leave now though. I don’t think we’ll be too late.” Alice quickly said.
Shane was shocked at Alice’s speech. She seemed to be apologizing for taking an extra 30 seconds in getting back outside. Shane’s protective instinct flared to the front.
“It was my fault. I haven’t seen Alice in quite a while and really would not let her leave until she spent a few minutes with us.” Shane indicated the table where Bette and Tina were closely watching the situation. It appeared that Tina was gently restraining Bette from going over with a hand on her arm.
“Allie? Do you want to go over and say ‘Hello’?” Jackie questioned. Shane felt it was almost in the tone you would use for a child.
“I know you hate being late. We should leave.” Once again Alice attempted to move to the door when she was stopped this time by Jackie.
“No. We can be a little late. I would like to meet your friends. I know they were important to you.”
“OK…” Alice said resignedly. “First, let me introduce Shane.” Shane and Jackie just nodded an acknowledgement of the introduction to each other.
Shane led the way back to the table. The look on her face warned Bette and Tina that they would not like what was coming their way.
Jackie walked closely behind Alice with her hand on her lower back. They made a striking couple with Alice’s light complexion and dark hair in sharp contrast to Jackie’s deep tan and light hair. As they approached the table, Bette stood up and offered her hand.
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am I first? oh yay! I love this. This is so good. It’s sad that Alice may have changed but the group did a mistake by not being there with her when she needed them. I’m sure Dana wouldn’t be too happy with Jackie too but this makes a really good story, it’s new, I like it. Cold woman by Alice’s side and Dana acting Shane-ish. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait where this goes. PPS:D
oh and yes, you’re posting fine. hehe thanks for updating M. I really really like it. :)
wat happened to alice:( she seems pushovery :S..i dont like this jackie character one bit although its gunna be very interesting wen she and dana meet lol great writing!!!
plz post again very very soon i would love to read where this is going
“Piercing blue eyes that did not have a hint of warmth” did not sound good to me already. Jackie seemed to me a control freak but maybe A needed to be taken care of after the heartbreak. I agree with the comments above, this was not the A that we have grown to know and love. I hope somehow she would go back to her old self as being confident, outspoken and fun. I think down the road, B could give Jackie a piece of her mind. It would be an interesting scene. And the rest of the gang could join in for the intervention. Last but not least, let D see what A had become. Not to use the guilt trip tactic, but ultimately, I hope D would realize that it could only her to bring A back. Excellant MaGoose, I really enjoy this update.
Ok, who is this woman and what has she done with Alice? I don’t like Jackie. I don’t like that Alice is being controlled by her. I can’t wait for my sweet Dana to find out about this. She won’t like it one bit. Can’t wait to see how the little get together turns out. Please post soon. This a great story.
Oh yeah. Dana is gonna hate Jackie. I’d bribe you to have a catfight between those two. But I’ll settle for a breakup and a Danish get together.
I have to agree with Luvs on this one. Where is Alice???? I don’t like this Jackie woman. GRRRRRRR! Bring on more, you have me very interested in what’s going to happen next. SAVE ALICE! *painting signs now*
I can’t stand this Jackie girl already. Can’t wait to see Dana on a rescue mission. Great job ;)
Magoose. I wanted to thank you for the support that you have given me. I’m taking things alot better now. I really love your story. I think Marital arts should have been part of Dana training schudule. I would watch two picks cat fight over Alice.Great story