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Closure – Chapter 3
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Alice glanced again at Jackie before starting. “She was the subject of one of my articles about two months ago. Jackie owns a company that markets exercise equipment tailored to women. The business has really taken off in the last couple years. And she… Uh… Pretty much swept me off my feet.” Alice blushed again and got a smile and kiss on the cheek from Jackie.
Jackie glanced at her watch and Alice immediately got ready to leave.
“It was great seeing you all, but, we really need to get going.” Alice and Jackie got up from their chairs.
“It was nice to meet you.” Jackie simply said.
Bette needed to think quickly. She knew instinctively that if Alice left now, there would be no telling when they would hear from her again.
“Alice? We are having a small get-together this weekend. Angie has a play date with several friends during the day and both Tina and I think we will need some adult time after spending several hours with pre-toddlers.” Once again the girls shared a smile as Jackie shifted uncomfortably. “Do you think you could come by?”
Alice looked almost panicked at the thought and immediately looked to Jackie for her input. “I think we are free that night, Allie, we can drop by for a little while.”
Alice quickly whispered to Jackie “We don’t have to if you don’t want. I know you have work that day and you get so tired.”
Jackie smiled at Alice and gave her a small kiss on the lips. “Your friends haven’t seen you in a while and you should catch up. You never know how long it might be before you have another chance.”
That seemed to seal it and Alice said they would be there Saturday night.
Shane, Bette and Tina avidly watched the interaction between the couple. When they left a few minutes later the girls started to dissect the short and strained meeting.
“I don’t like her. That woman does not seem to be right for Alice.” Bette offered up first. “God. It was good to see her, though. I don’t think I realized how much I missed her.”
Shane normally did not get involved with her friends lives unless they asked, but, this was a different case. “I agree. And Alice did not seem very relaxed around her.”
“And did either of you notice the oddest thing?” At the confused looks from the couple, Shane said “She never asked about Dana. I never thought the day would come where Alice wouldn’t at least ask how she was doing.”
Tina spoke up “Sadly, we have all been guilty of not being there for Alice. The reasons may have seemed sound at the time but we were wrong and we are losing Alice as a result. We need to make sure that this party is the first step towards rebuilding that connection.”
Shane sat back in her chair and said “I can tell you one thing I know for sure: Dana is going to hate that woman.”
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am I first? oh yay! I love this. This is so good. It’s sad that Alice may have changed but the group did a mistake by not being there with her when she needed them. I’m sure Dana wouldn’t be too happy with Jackie too but this makes a really good story, it’s new, I like it. Cold woman by Alice’s side and Dana acting Shane-ish. Keep up the good work. I can’t wait where this goes. PPS:D
oh and yes, you’re posting fine. hehe thanks for updating M. I really really like it. :)
wat happened to alice:( she seems pushovery :S..i dont like this jackie character one bit although its gunna be very interesting wen she and dana meet lol great writing!!!
plz post again very very soon i would love to read where this is going
“Piercing blue eyes that did not have a hint of warmth” did not sound good to me already. Jackie seemed to me a control freak but maybe A needed to be taken care of after the heartbreak. I agree with the comments above, this was not the A that we have grown to know and love. I hope somehow she would go back to her old self as being confident, outspoken and fun. I think down the road, B could give Jackie a piece of her mind. It would be an interesting scene. And the rest of the gang could join in for the intervention. Last but not least, let D see what A had become. Not to use the guilt trip tactic, but ultimately, I hope D would realize that it could only her to bring A back. Excellant MaGoose, I really enjoy this update.
Ok, who is this woman and what has she done with Alice? I don’t like Jackie. I don’t like that Alice is being controlled by her. I can’t wait for my sweet Dana to find out about this. She won’t like it one bit. Can’t wait to see how the little get together turns out. Please post soon. This a great story.
Oh yeah. Dana is gonna hate Jackie. I’d bribe you to have a catfight between those two. But I’ll settle for a breakup and a Danish get together.
I have to agree with Luvs on this one. Where is Alice???? I don’t like this Jackie woman. GRRRRRRR! Bring on more, you have me very interested in what’s going to happen next. SAVE ALICE! *painting signs now*
I can’t stand this Jackie girl already. Can’t wait to see Dana on a rescue mission. Great job ;)
Magoose. I wanted to thank you for the support that you have given me. I’m taking things alot better now. I really love your story. I think Marital arts should have been part of Dana training schudule. I would watch two picks cat fight over Alice.Great story