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Closure – Chapter 31
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Dana was transfixed in watching Alice. Something about being with Angie brought out the “old” Alice. Dana had seen glimpses over the past several weeks, but, she always seemed to return to a more demure, haunted state. Moments like this reminded Dana that her Alice was still in there. Alice seemed so relaxed. Dana thought about it and figured it might have something to do with the fact that Angie didn’t know anything about what happened with Alice and she knew she wouldn’t be judged or treated differently.
It took almost fifteen minutes to get the princesses freed from their plastic prisons. Once they were, though, there was no stopping Alice and Angelica. The princesses had parties and spent time visiting each other’s castles. Shane and Carmen showed up and then Kit shortly after. Alice would break for a few minutes to say “Hello” and give hugs, but, then would get back down on the floor to play. It got to be time to eat.
Dana went over to the two “kids” playing with their toys. “Guys? It’s time to eat.” She held out her hand to help Alice up.
Alice looked up with puppy dog eyes and said “Five more minutes? Please? We were just going to have the grand ball…”
That would have done it — even without Angie adding her plea of “Pees?” Dana got on the floor with the two of them. Bette came over 15 minutes later and played responsible adult to get all of them to come get something to eat.
Angie was put down to bed after the meal. Alice read her a bedtime story and promised to be back soon to play princesses some more. Dana quickly realized that Alice could use a nap, too. Everyone was out by the pool and Dana pulled Alice down into one of the chaise lounges and let her curl up next to her body. There were a couple quiet jokes about the other kid needing a nap, but, they were all in good fun. Tina brought out a blanket after Alice drifted off and Dana tucked it around the writer.
The rest of he gang drank, talked, joked, and swam quietly as Alice slept. They were all thrilled to have the framily back together when they came so close to losing it.
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YAY was reli pleased to see an update. As usual sooooo good and sweet and all the other things this story is lol. Cant wait for ur next post things are slowly heating up!! :) pps
Love boo and alice! nice that alice go to spend sometime with the gang!long road but they are doing so well!
Good to see Alice getting stronger…bit by bit. I loved the end of the story, Alice ‘initiating the make out’. (At least that’s how I interpreted it…a girl can dream, can’t she?)
I love the way you write this story,makes me smile and get a warm feeling inside! Thanks hon!! Glad Al is getting better,and Dana being there for her!! Love the lil makeout session at the end! PPVS
Love when Alice can just be Alice. She can do that with Angie,she puts herself to Angie level and both are so swet together. thanks
was never into dolls myself, but that was just too cute :) hmmm wonder what Al was dreaming about ;0 great chapter!!!(when you perfect the clones and finish all the Dana’s would you consider creating a Shane? pretty please with sugar on top??)
okay now you’ve got me scared with your drama warning! And that rather cryptic line in the summary about the scene before the crime…lol I know what you meant unless you’re being crafty and trying to throw us off. But yeah, I love this, how cute. And Alice feeling Dana up is a good sign, no? It better be. Anyway, this comment makes little to no sense, and I can’t make myself care. Loved the update, hurry up and post again!
I like how Dana is so thoughtful with Alice, this, I think wasn’t shown much in the show. I can totally see Dana taking care of Alice tis way for real. Thanks Magoose, great story you have here.
great as usual. I love this story. I know what kind of desert Dana was thinking about. WOOT. sorry. KILL JACKIE ANYWAY. Sorry I have spells like that sometimes. Anyway keep it coming
your amazing!and so is this story, i love the way the characters interact with each other and i think you get it so right! this is my favourite story at the minute and i always look for it when i come on hoping u have updated! so pps and keep up this brilliant story and get alice and dana together!yey!x
I LOVE HOW WELL they are doing together…notice i said together! I’m glad Dana is opening up to Alice and letting her know she isnt the only one with problems. Alice could hump my leg anyday!! LoL I love it! OutstandiNg!!! PPS!!
Hello MaGoose, that was so so very sweet. You have such a strong grasp of this family… I love how innocent Alice becomes when she is with her “Earth Daughter” she just seems to melt away from all the pain and absorb her old sense of life. Dana is such a beautiful soul to hold Alice during this time… reflecting and just being so passionate about who she is and what she wants… and the fact that she is waiting for Alice is just perfect. I cannot wait to see where you go with this and well I cannot wait to see what else you have brewing in that creative soul of yours :wink: :wink: Sincerely, JC