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Closure – Chapter 31
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It happened on one of Alice’s bad days. Dana came over so they could go for a walk and Alice did not want to. She didn’t even want to leave the apartment. It took some gentle coaxing from Dana, but, she finally got her to agree to get some air. They went to the beach and took off their shoes and walked along the surf. Alice was very quiet.
Dana tried to bring her out of her shell and maybe get her to talk about what was bothering her. “You had an appointment with your therapist this morning, didn’t you? How did that go?”
The writer just continued walking and occasionally dragged her toes in the sand. After a couple minutes of uncomfortable silence, Alice responded. “It was a tough one. Sometimes I think I’ve gotten to the bottom of my feelings about Jackie and then there is another layer…” Alice trailed off. They were quiet again for several minutes.
“You know I started seeing a therapist…” Dana said carefully.
“Really?” Alice said as she turned to Dana with an expression of surprise.
“Yes.” Dana was looking down at the sand as she talked. She didn’t want to lie to Alice, but, she also wasn’t ready to confess that the Jackie “thing” was what drove her to seek therapy.
“I started a couple months ago. It was after Lara left and I was trying to understand myself and why I seemed to be making choices that weren’t working for me.” Dana gave a quick glance to Alice and found she was attentively listening as they kept up their leisurely walking pace. “I mean… I talked to Shane…” Both girls exchanged a quick smile. “…but there are just some things you need an impartial person for, you know?”
Alice nodded in agreement.
“It’s easy to look back and see you made a mistake, but, it is so much harder to understand why you did it. I want to understand so I can make better decisions. I want to try to be a more complete person and maybe…next time…to be a better partner to someone.” She shrugged her shoulders as she said this last part.
Both women had stopped at this point. Alice looked over at Dana, who was still staring at the ground. She reached out and gently ran her thumb across Dana’s cheek as she lifted the other woman’s head up so their eyes could meet. Alice then leaned in and placed a soft, sweet kiss on Dana’s lips. It was short, but, conveyed a lot of what Alice was feeling.
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YAY was reli pleased to see an update. As usual sooooo good and sweet and all the other things this story is lol. Cant wait for ur next post things are slowly heating up!! :) pps
Love boo and alice! nice that alice go to spend sometime with the gang!long road but they are doing so well!
Good to see Alice getting stronger…bit by bit. I loved the end of the story, Alice ‘initiating the make out’. (At least that’s how I interpreted it…a girl can dream, can’t she?)
I love the way you write this story,makes me smile and get a warm feeling inside! Thanks hon!! Glad Al is getting better,and Dana being there for her!! Love the lil makeout session at the end! PPVS
Love when Alice can just be Alice. She can do that with Angie,she puts herself to Angie level and both are so swet together. thanks
was never into dolls myself, but that was just too cute :) hmmm wonder what Al was dreaming about ;0 great chapter!!!(when you perfect the clones and finish all the Dana’s would you consider creating a Shane? pretty please with sugar on top??)
okay now you’ve got me scared with your drama warning! And that rather cryptic line in the summary about the scene before the crime…lol I know what you meant unless you’re being crafty and trying to throw us off. But yeah, I love this, how cute. And Alice feeling Dana up is a good sign, no? It better be. Anyway, this comment makes little to no sense, and I can’t make myself care. Loved the update, hurry up and post again!
I like how Dana is so thoughtful with Alice, this, I think wasn’t shown much in the show. I can totally see Dana taking care of Alice tis way for real. Thanks Magoose, great story you have here.
great as usual. I love this story. I know what kind of desert Dana was thinking about. WOOT. sorry. KILL JACKIE ANYWAY. Sorry I have spells like that sometimes. Anyway keep it coming
your amazing!and so is this story, i love the way the characters interact with each other and i think you get it so right! this is my favourite story at the minute and i always look for it when i come on hoping u have updated! so pps and keep up this brilliant story and get alice and dana together!yey!x
I LOVE HOW WELL they are doing together…notice i said together! I’m glad Dana is opening up to Alice and letting her know she isnt the only one with problems. Alice could hump my leg anyday!! LoL I love it! OutstandiNg!!! PPS!!
Hello MaGoose, that was so so very sweet. You have such a strong grasp of this family… I love how innocent Alice becomes when she is with her “Earth Daughter” she just seems to melt away from all the pain and absorb her old sense of life. Dana is such a beautiful soul to hold Alice during this time… reflecting and just being so passionate about who she is and what she wants… and the fact that she is waiting for Alice is just perfect. I cannot wait to see where you go with this and well I cannot wait to see what else you have brewing in that creative soul of yours :wink: :wink: Sincerely, JC