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Closure – Chapter 31
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“That is the sweetest thing I have ever heard.” Alice smiled warmly and put her hands in her pockets to continue walking along the beach. Dana quickly caught up and they spent the rest of the walk talking about silly TV shows.
Dana smiled thinking about the kiss and held Alice a little closer. She also noticed that she and Alice were alone outside at the moment. The rest of the girls had gone inside to refresh their drinks and dig into the desserts.
Alice moved slightly as Dana held her closer. She was in that delightful area of not quite awake and not quite asleep. She curled in even closer to Dana. As she did, her leg made its way on top of Dana’s with her knee resting right near Dana’s crotch. Her hand rubbed Dana’s stomach softly before gliding up to land on her breast.
Dana stopped breathing. It may have been that time itself actually stopped. She knew – she knew she should wake Alice up. Or she should at least move her hand to a less intimate spot. But, god help her, it felt too good. It felt too right…
Alice shifted slightly again. This time her knee began to rub up-and-down against Dana’s crotch and her hand started to caress Dana’s breast with her thumb stroking her nipple. Alice then started to slowly grind herself into Dana’s hip bone.
Dana’s eyes closed as she savored the feelings coursing through her body. She knew she was getting wet and it seemed like every nerve ending was on fire. She let out an involuntary moan…
That soft noise was enough to nudge Alice to awaken. It happened slowly enough to give Dana a few precious seconds to get some sort of composure to try to alleviate any embarrassment Alice might feel. Alice looked at Dana with her adorable, fuzzy, just-woke-up expression. Dana responded with a warm smile and then Alice realized that she was just short of humping Dana and blushed a deep red.
“Geez, Dane, I’m so sorry…” Alice stammered and she extricated herself from Dana and put some space between them on the lounge.
“Don’t be.” Dana said — her voice husky. “That’s the most action I’ve had in a while.” Dana broke into her trademark goofy grin. Alice couldn’t help but smile back. Just then, Shane appeared in the doorway and noticed Alice was awake.
“Guys? Come on and get some dessert.” She waved at them to indicate they should come inside.
“Right.” Dana said. She took a deep breath and stood up. She offered her hand to Alice and helped her up. They walked hand-in-hand back into the house.
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YAY was reli pleased to see an update. As usual sooooo good and sweet and all the other things this story is lol. Cant wait for ur next post things are slowly heating up!! :) pps
Love boo and alice! nice that alice go to spend sometime with the gang!long road but they are doing so well!
Good to see Alice getting stronger…bit by bit. I loved the end of the story, Alice ‘initiating the make out’. (At least that’s how I interpreted it…a girl can dream, can’t she?)
I love the way you write this story,makes me smile and get a warm feeling inside! Thanks hon!! Glad Al is getting better,and Dana being there for her!! Love the lil makeout session at the end! PPVS
Love when Alice can just be Alice. She can do that with Angie,she puts herself to Angie level and both are so swet together. thanks
was never into dolls myself, but that was just too cute :) hmmm wonder what Al was dreaming about ;0 great chapter!!!(when you perfect the clones and finish all the Dana’s would you consider creating a Shane? pretty please with sugar on top??)
okay now you’ve got me scared with your drama warning! And that rather cryptic line in the summary about the scene before the crime…lol I know what you meant unless you’re being crafty and trying to throw us off. But yeah, I love this, how cute. And Alice feeling Dana up is a good sign, no? It better be. Anyway, this comment makes little to no sense, and I can’t make myself care. Loved the update, hurry up and post again!
I like how Dana is so thoughtful with Alice, this, I think wasn’t shown much in the show. I can totally see Dana taking care of Alice tis way for real. Thanks Magoose, great story you have here.
great as usual. I love this story. I know what kind of desert Dana was thinking about. WOOT. sorry. KILL JACKIE ANYWAY. Sorry I have spells like that sometimes. Anyway keep it coming
your amazing!and so is this story, i love the way the characters interact with each other and i think you get it so right! this is my favourite story at the minute and i always look for it when i come on hoping u have updated! so pps and keep up this brilliant story and get alice and dana together!yey!x
I LOVE HOW WELL they are doing together…notice i said together! I’m glad Dana is opening up to Alice and letting her know she isnt the only one with problems. Alice could hump my leg anyday!! LoL I love it! OutstandiNg!!! PPS!!
Hello MaGoose, that was so so very sweet. You have such a strong grasp of this family… I love how innocent Alice becomes when she is with her “Earth Daughter” she just seems to melt away from all the pain and absorb her old sense of life. Dana is such a beautiful soul to hold Alice during this time… reflecting and just being so passionate about who she is and what she wants… and the fact that she is waiting for Alice is just perfect. I cannot wait to see where you go with this and well I cannot wait to see what else you have brewing in that creative soul of yours :wink: :wink: Sincerely, JC