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Closure – Chapter 39
The knocking persisted.
“Go destroy it, honey.” Alice said softly while giving Dana kisses on her jaw line.
Dana gave her a soft smile and said “Anything for you, baby.” She got out of bed and dug around the various pieces of clothing on the floor to find something to cover herself. Alice quite enjoyed the show. Once Dana was dressed she came back over to the bed.
“I’ll be right back, honey.” Dana said and gave Alice a soft kiss on the lips. “I love you.” Then she turned and left the room. Alice smiled and curled back under the covers to wait for her love.
Dana was back in minutes. At first Alice could not see her because she was obscured by the enormous basket she was carrying.
“Wow. I’m glad I made you answer.” Alice said when Dana placed it on the ground near the bed. “That thing must weigh a ton!” Dana smiled and flexed her arm muscles. Alice’s mouth went dry and she forgot the basket for a moment as she thought of licking every inch of those sculpted arms.
Then she smelled something wonderful coming from the basket and her stomach growled.
Dana leaned over and placed a kiss on her stomach. “Hungry, much?”
“My woman has kept me busy.” Alice said as she pulled Dana into a proper kiss. “Welcome back.” Dana smiled her goofy smile.
“There’s a note. Do you want to do the honors?” She handed the envelope over to Alice who opened it quickly.
The note was simple:
Al/Dane –
We were concerned you might die of starvation. Give us a shout when you come up for air.
Love you guys!
Kit, Bette, Tina, Shane and Carmen
Both Alice and Dana broke out laughing as they dug into the basket. Kit had apparently packed up everything on the menu. There were notes on most of the items in the different girl’s handwriting: “Today: Lunch”, “Today: Dinner”, “Today: High-Protein/High-Energy Nighttime Snack”, “Tomorrow: Breakfast (put in fridge)”, “Tomorrow: Lunch (fridge and microwave on high for 2 minutes)”, and on and on. By the time the girls got to the bottom of the basket, they had meals for 3 days — more if you included the likely leftovers. In addition there was bottled water, Planet coffee beans, a couple bottles of champagne, some spray cans of whipped cream (when they saw that, the girls looked at each other and said “Shane!”), and numerous other snacks, sweets and goodies. There were even napkins, paper plates and plastic utensils.
“Wow.” Dana said as the surveyed the pile of food.
“Wow is right. Pop open that “Today: Lunch” while I put the rest of this stuff away.”
Alice got out of bed in all her naked glory and started to gather up the food that needed to go in the fridge.
“I can’t believe they did all this for us.” She said as she piled up containers to carry them more easily. Dana didn’t hear a word.
She was mesmerized by Alice. She was breathtaking. Dana was ecstatic that she was so comfortable walking around naked. She moved behind Alice and slipped her arms around the writer’s waist. Alice immediately sank back into the embrace.
“You know, Al, it isn’t quite lunchtime, yet. It’s only 11:36.” Dana was peppering Alice’s shoulders with kisses while her hands roamed over abdomen, thighs and hips. She was rewarded with a moan from the writer.
“You’re right, Dane. If we eat any earlier, we are no better than barbarians.” She turned around and captured Dana’s lips in a kiss that quickly deepened. Alice pulled off Dana’s pants as Dana quickly shed the top. They once again fell back onto the bed.
They didn’t have lunch until 3.
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(36 votes, average: 3.94 out of 5)
Yeah for the gang and that basket!! triple yeah for the whip cream hehe… :)
LOL Tht was brilliant, cute but Oh so hot! lol. “Shane!” Tht was a good one did make me giggle. I think i smiled all the way through this. Loved it as usual and cant wait for ur next post. :) I must post mine wen i have time to finish it :S lol. PPS x x
awww i love love love the cuteness!! that was one of my favourite chapters! sorry i havnt commented in a while just been bogged down with work etc! but yeah i loved go destroy it! and id do anything for my baby!(might not be the line but something like it!) and u updated so fast!i love u please keep up the cuteness maybe the next chapter could be their next three days in bed?lol thanks for posting!!x
my brain short circuited at fuck her senselessly against the wall so it’s pretty much…fire bad tree pretty..hmm whipped cream/Sha….need a cold drink…….
I definitely felt it all through the chapter. Those two women are more passionate than the horniest couples in the film industry. And you had me in all 3 pages. It really was that excellent and thank you.
hey you’ve been posting so regularly i love it..and i love this story they are just so cute together im glad they’ve finally made it to this point..how nice are there friends and i love they’re having all this sex haha
I have to say I LOVE LOVE LOVE your stories. I feel bad for taking the first comment because i have never commented before, but I might as well jump in all at once.
GO destroy it!!! YAYAYAYAYAYAY! I’m seriously running out of wonderful things to say about you! I think you know where i’m coming from, glad to see you pst so soon, i was anxious to see what you had and have in store! Again, loved it sooo much!
I just read the last 3 chapters… Wow!… You are an amazing writer and I still love your story, I just suck at leaving comments… More please?
You really make me smile you know that?!?! I giggled when I read whip cream and both said “Shane”,that was awesome!!!So sweet the girls made up a basket full of food for them,I’m sure they needed the fuel!! WOW thats all I can say for you and your writing and yes it got the HDD seal of approval AGAIN!!! Thanks so much for this story,U ROCK sweetie!!! PPVS
I know they need fluid,can help but to love the gang. Guess you need more than H2o I love this,guess because Dana is so sweet and took care of Al. so well in many ways. The whip Cream was great,both knew who send that. thanks for posting
damn. This is it right here, I love happy Danish. didn’t have lunch ’till three eh? lol not so surprised by that. thanks, tis be awesome.