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Collision Course 4.09
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“Ladies, I need a moment of Shane’s time, Carmen, you lovely thing, if you’d be so kind as to have a moment with Justin, who’ll be offering you an obscene amount of money to DJ at my club… Shane..,” said Brian, sweeping her away into the crowd. Brian’s left hand draped across his chest as he did his charming routine.
Shane turned, but Brian was easily moving her to the periphery of the room, “I know you want to do more knock down, drag out fighting with her, but give me a minute and I’ll make it worth your while….”
“Man, I know you gave me Sam’s number, but, that’s the girl I was gonna marry and I messed it up, and she won’t give me the time of day… At least she’s listening right now…”
“Want me to make her give you the time of day? Shane…,” smiled Brian. “you have a reputation for being… well…”
“Easy?” asked Shane, crossing her arms over her chest, wondering what the gay man wanted.
“How many have you fucked? Come on, ball park…” laughed Brian, standing his ground, blocking Shane’s view of Carmen.
“Over two thousand, give or take…,” answered Shane with regret, not looking at Brian, instead watching as Justin spoke to Carmen, who seemed very interested in what he was saying.
Brian didn’t say anything, licking his cotton candy lips and thought about his answer, “Not as many as me, but we’ll just say you’re a stud… for a girl… that would make you….,” struggling for the words, he didn’t want to offend her.
“Man, move aside…”
“I can make her spend time with you,” announced Brian, turning and giving Shane a seething sexy look.
“I’m listening,” said Shane, rooted to her spot. Brian began to outline his plan, after ten minutes, Shane was intrigued, after fifteen she was ready to sign on the dotted line of Brian’s plan.
“So, as you can see, we need a DJ,” explained Justin. He pulled out a check from his pocket, handing it to Carmen. “An advance, and there is more where that came from. I’m sure if you want you can continue working with Sam…”
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If every lesbian looked like Bette Porter then everyone would switch, eh? give Bette a break. She’s smart, sexy and delicious.
Have to agree w/ Lilah, the Tibette ship has sailed & passed. Would love to see Bette with anyone else but Tina. Same for Tina as well.Alice & Ro? Hmm don’t know, Luv Alice’s jealousy though. Poor Sam, having to deal w/ drunken vomit, something I would hate to deal with. Its too early in your fic for me to guess where you are going w/ this story cause you’ll just throw me for a loop. Luv the chap.
Sweet!!! I’m lovin’ where you’re takin’ this story!!!! Boy, Ro seemed pretty pissed when Tina compaired her to my girl, Shane . . . can’t wait to see where you take that . . . I’m also pretty excited to see where you take the whole Shane/Carmen thang . . . Don’t keep me waitin’ 4 long!!!! Doin’ a n awesome job, Baby-girl!!! Like always from me, LYLAS ;-p
Bette is working her magic on yet another HOT straight girl….oh goody! Sam is too funny as she bitches to the Lesbian Goda about Alice. I’m not liking this Rosita’ chick too much. She is sneaky and competitive. Post soon.
Poor Al, she’s gonna have one big hangover in the morning. And she’s gonna have to clean Sam’s shoes lol. I liked it when Ro got angry with Tina’s comment on the Shane comparison. Shane seems to be a weak spot in Ro’s mind, and I don’t think it’s only because of Shane and Carmen’s history. As for Bette, I don’t think you’re being to evil for her, so carry on lol ;).
Why is it so hard to be a little nice to Bette? Would it kill you? So will Bette be responsible for getting another straight woman to fall for her? Namely Jayden? As usual Tina is confused…I say let her see Bette with someone else (besides Helena…thank god you didn’t go there in this story) and see if se remains confused.
Jayden and Bette?, Now that could be an interesting pairing. It would be fun to see Bette seduce her into joining her team. Anyway, right now it is definitely hard to figure out which direction you will have them all going in. That’s what is so fun about your stories…I have always loved the characters that you created and this is going to be very interesting to see who will pair up with who, now that in this story some of them are so different. Always looking forward to the next….!
Yeah,, be nice to my Bette. Love to see TiBette fighting for each other. They reallyare meant for each other. Love the story and the comical aspects to it.
Oh how I adore your writing, let me count the ways….:) Poor Alice. She is going to feel so much worst in the morning. And, whoever your secret e-mailer is, send her a big thank you from me…cause I love my Bette!!! Thanks!!
Lijah…are you against them in this story or totally…really think about your answer as I gather some tar and feathers….lol
Let me start by saying I’m completely against the TiBette thing. I think they are horrible together. I think Bette and Sam would be nice, but that’s just me. I love your story as always.
Hey lady, Get the garden plowed and Julie putting in a fall garden. This is a one handed comment fell dislocatated my right shoulder. Dont mop kitchen floor and walk on it before drying.. For some reason cant get to comment on other site. I love this story,Sam is so darn cute Lets be nicer to Bette she needs loving too. If not Tina some one as nice as Tina is. Get on the ball and send us at least one chapter a week. I love your stories. thanks