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Collision Course – 4.16
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“To say the least,” added Jayden.
Sam laughed, “Because Cody was black, and Jesse would never pass for our kid, when he was young, he was much darker. We got asked if he was adopted so many times, that we wanted to have T-Shirts made declaring he wasn’t adopted.”
“I got that, ‘it’s so sweet that you adopted a colored baby’..,” said Tina.
“When?” asked Bette, trying to remember when that had happened, then with a sickening jolt, realized it must have happened with Henry.
“When I was out to dinner one night,” said Tina, wondering what Jo Wheaton had planned for Henry, and if she even cared anymore.
“That’s ridiculous. It shouldn’t matter what color your child is, adopted or not, your child is your child, you love them no less, if not more,” said Helena steadfastly.
Everyone fell into soft easy conversations, more laughter, telling of stories. A few with Dana at the center. Retelling the tale of how they’d played ‘mission impossible’ and scoped out Lara the soup chef. Julie would roll her eyes and state, again, that she was much cooler than Dana ‘the tennis player’ Fairbanks.
A knock came at the door, Dr. Darci Haim-Cyr was standing there, looking exhausted. There was blood spattered on her dark green scrubs, another woman was behind her, white blonde hair, with dark mysterious eyes.
“Sam?” said Darci, trying to reign in her emotions.
“Yeah?” said Sam.
Lindsay stood for no reason, seeing a badge on the hip of the woman behind Dr. Cyr. Rosita saw it too, giving Carmen a quick look, hoping this wasn’t about the gunshot wound.
“Could you… come back to your room? This woman… would like to speak to you,” croaked out Darci. The words hard to form, this was the first time since she’d become a doctor that she’d had trouble telling someone bad news.
“What’s going on?” demanded Brian.
“Sam, are you pressing charges about me decking you?” asked Carmen with a chuckle.
Sam shook her head, “No, god no.”
“Miss Vance? If you’d just give us a moment of your time, in private might be best?” the woman said. “I’m Detective Leigh Drake, I just need a moment.”
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.