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Collision Course – 4.16
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“That’s true,” muttered Justin, his mouth full of rice. Everyone looked at the cute blond boy, “Well, she is sexy. Just because I’m gay doesn’t mean I don’t look at women that way.”
“I’ve got a bisexual on my hands,” sighed Brian dramatically, hanging his head, getting a playful slap from Justin and a laugh from Lindsay.
Tina covered Angelica’s ears, “Ok, enough sex talk, there are little ears in the room.”
“There are no little cocks in the room, I can assure you of that, unless Mel is packing…,” said Brian, reaching over and uncovering Angelica’s ears, “She’s going to learn it one way or the other, aren’t you Angelica?” asked Brian.
“Uh huh,” she said to him. “Your cute,” she added.
More laughter, Carmen handing Melanie some more noodles, Mel smiled a thank you. Jayden went to get more bottle of water with Julie, while Alice watched them both leaving the room, whistling at the view.
“It’s gonna be hard…,” muttered Sam thoughtfully.
“It’s not hard now,” answered Brian quickly.
Groans in the room, and Sam shook her head, “No, to find a match for her. Being of mixed race.”
“I hadn’t thought of that,” said Tina, pushing back Angelica’s hair from her eyes. The girl looked up, smiling at her mother. Bette cringed, wishing she’d never pushed for Marcus to be the donor suddenly.
“Sam, now isn’t the time,” said Lindsay.
“It is, they’ve got to know… look at Jesse, it would be the same thing if he were in that bed,” said Sam.
“What do you mean?” asked Rosita, easing her bandages on her leg up, but Alice slapped her hand away like a child.
“Jesse’s father is black,” said Jayden as they came back into the room, handing out more bottle of water.
“He’s got blue eyes,” said Bette, pulling up a mental image of the young man in her mind. He did, indeed, have dark skin, and dark hair.
“Genetic quark, we were stumped too, trust me,” said Sam. “When CJ got pregnant, she was freaked out…,”
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.