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Collision Course – 4.16
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“Well, you think? I remember spreading her ashes for Christ sakes,” said Tina. “I’m sorry, does she know she looks just like…”
“I don’t look like her, she looks like me, so there. I’m older than her by like, two weeks. So she looks like me, not visa versa. Hi, I’m Julie Reno. Hey boss,” said Julie, waving to Jo, who nodded.
“Boss?” said both Tina and Alice simultaneously. Spinning around to face the cute tomboy, Jo Wheaton. Jo’s hands were in her pockets, Darci excusing herself as she was given Sam’s chart. Jo waited until Darci was gone before answering, Tina with her hands crossed across her chest, and Alice with her hand on her hips. Julie just stood there, looking around, keeping tabs on everything that was going on.
“Julie works for my P.I. firm, what are you doing here, Reno?” asked Jo, watching Darci moving over to Sam Vance. Who was holding a jacket over her hands, Jo leaned around Alice and watched as Sam spoke to Darci. “Reno?”
“Yeah?” said Julie with a smile on her lips, sharp eyes twinkling. Seeing her boss instantly accessing the situation.
“Why is Sam Vance handcuffed?” asked Jo in her French tainted voice.
“The bumbling blonde did it,” said Julie, pointing to Alice with her thumb.
“Bumbling? Well, at least you didn’t call me a bimbo!” snorted Alice.
“I’m still holding out on the option,” shot back Julie.
“And you’d be?” asked Jo, looking Alice over with her blue grey eyes. Alice felt the heat in the gaze and resisted the urge to fan herself. The tomboy’s blonde hair seemed to have a mind of its own, falling into her eyes as she looked up at Alice with hooded eyes.
“Alice Pieszecki, and you?”
“Jo Wheaton, I came in with Tina to see her daughter, Angelica,” began Jo, motioning to the room behind them.
“Oh my god, what happened to Angelica?” asked Alice loudly, instantly hugging Tina, who smiled quickly.
“She fell at Kit’s, but Dr. Cyr thinks there is something more going on than a simple fall. She’s being evasive,” stated Tina. Angelica was having a scan done, and they’d said it was better if she waited there. Tina ached to be with her daughter, but she did want to know what was wrong.
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.