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Collision Course – 4.16
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“Ok… shhhh, she’s going to be fine, it’s nothing, I’m sure,” whispered Bette, kissing the top of Tina’s head as she wrapped her arms around Tina.
“Darci’s back,” said Jo to them, having just hung up her phone, and had whispered something to Julie, her investigator nodded, instantly pulling out her Blackberry and began to type quickly. “I’m going to go take the handcuff’s off Sam,” she added.
“Sam? Why is Sam in handcuffs?” asked Bette loudly, looking over and watching Jo go into a curtained area. “Who was that woman? Why does she know you? Someone talk to me, now?”
Alice blushed, “It’s a long story…., it all started with Carmen actually…,” over the next ten minutes, Alice told them all about Sam, her bloody nose, which Carmen gave her, the Dana Fairbanks look alike, and just how it came about that Sam Vance was in handcuffs.
Bette and Tina entered the room where Angelica was sleeping soundly, Darci was going over the tests, motioning for Bette and Tina to enter. “I’m going to wait out here,” said Jo to Tina. Jo slid her Blackberry into her back pocket and entered.
“No, come in, it’s ok, Alice, please?” Alice nodded, as did Jo. Shuffling in, Jo was looking down at her feet. Darci gave her a cold look, but Jo ignored it efficiently. There was a lot of good things between Jo and Darci, and yet, there was still an animosity that clung to their rejuvenated friendship.
“We ran some tests, and I’m going to be rather blunt with you, Angelica has some liver damage,” said Darci. Holding the chart up next to her, giving Jo a look, and Jo nodded. Darci sighed, reluctantly trusting Jo.
“Liver? But, how?” asked Tina, grabbing hold of Bette’s hand tightly. Bette squeezed back softly, making Tina aware that she was there. Standing hip to hip, getting the news standing up.
“Trauma,” stated Darci. “I was going to call child services…”
“Are you attempting to say that we abuse our child? I’ll have you know that…,” began Bette loudly, but Darci waved her hand, silencing her.
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.