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Collision Course – 4.16
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“…what do you have to do to get a bullet wound looked at around here? Does she have to bleed out? Isn’t that what you call it? Bleeding out? Perhaps if we sat her on the desk and allowed her to sputter more blood on your precious hospital floors you might have the consideration to have a look at her? If it’s about the money, I’m the Dean of the Art Institute and I’ll gladly cover the costs…” said Bette at the desk.
“Bette?” said Tina, causing Bette to spin around, revealing that she had blood all over her shirt. “Good lord, what is going on? Is everyone here?”
“It’s not mine, what are you doing here? Are you alright?” asked Bette, instantly concerned. Taking a tentative step towards Tina, but then remembering that Tina had chosen to leave her.
“Kit didn’t call you?” asked Tina, who’d asked Kit to call Bette, but seemingly hadn’t.
“No, what is going on?” repeated Bette. Just as Rosita hopped over, slapping away Carmen’s hands, who was attempting to stop Rosita from going over to Bette. Rosita saw the look on Tina’s face, and knew that something was wrong. Carmen’s boss, Sam, was being led over to another curtained area. It seemed that everyone was here, the only one missing was Shane.
“Jesus, what happened to you?” asked Alice, looking at Rosita. Carmen rolled her eyes at Alice, and Alice reached over, touching Carmen’s split lip, but Carmen said nothing.
“Got shot, whatcha doing here, bella?” asked Rosita as Carmen slipped under her arm to help her stand. Ro smiled a thank you to her cousin.
“I was asking the same thing, Tina?” asked Bette, wanting to reach for Tina, but resisting. She knew something was wrong with Tina, or something had happened, because of the flush in her cheeks and the way her hands were shaking.
“It’s Angelica, she took a fall, but the doctor wanted to take some more tests…,” finally Tina broke down, tears spilling from her eyes. Bette reached for her, pulling her close. Forgetting about who left who, and why. None of it mattered, the only thing that mattered was their daughter.
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you continue to have me by the seat of my pants! Loving this. I actually liked how Bette and Tina pushed aside their differences and were able to be there for their daughter. Henry needs to suffer greatly. Thanks can’t wait for more!
Oh, god. That was just awful. I’m glad Jesse will live on in Angie, but that was heartbreaking. I had just spent a kind of a vicious minute there, hoping Jo was gonna just make Hank suffer, but screw him. I like the way you’re entwining the stories more with each chapter. Engrossing stuff, Janet. Cheers
Oh my goodness…why did I read this at work…very well written but dag…so sad…Henry is as good as dead.
this story is amazing please update soon. i think i’m addicted to this story
Damn, Girl . . . you got me cryin’ . . . And I’m gonna’ tell ya’ right now, that this tomboy don’t cry to easily especially after just ‘reading’ something . . . That’s a fucked up deal . . . Jesse havin’ to die and all . . . God, you should like write for the fuckin’ show ;-p ~tear falls~ . . . Okay, I’m kool, now, ANYWAYS, my girl, Shane, has like perfect timing . . . glad Sam took that hand . . . I wander what’s gonna’ become of Shane and Sam and Carmen . . . Baby-girl, you got me fuckin’ hooked and like the others that are out here, I need my fix, like NOW!!! LMFAO!!! Anyways, keep up the great work and update soon for me . . . and like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . love ya’ . . . holla at me!!!!
I’m really sorry that you are feeling so bad. Hope you get better soon…Man, did shit hit the fan or what? A lot of times one can figure out the direction a story is taking, but never one of yours! That’s why I love reading anything that you write. Ok, just when I think Bette possibly might go for Jayden or even Sam or Rosita, she ends up getting close to Tina. As you would say “MERDE!” Thanks for posting when you were so sick. Next one soon…pleeeze?
Good God you are a drama queen!!! Drama, drama, drama!!! The thing is…I love your style of drama. Because of your writing abilities, I am on the edge of my seat every second while reading this. Oh, and your author’s comments to me…you are one of the few who can comfort me while still making me feel like I am on the edge of the cliff!! “…but at the end, I think you’ll remember why I’m a rogue…” Okay, I am definitely falling off that cliff!! Thanks JM!
WOW! I am speechless, thank goodness all I have to do is write my comments & not say them. Never in a million years would I have thought that Jesse would be a casualty in your story. Kudos, ya shocked me, you always take a route that no one would expect. Truly feel for Sam, losing Jesse & his bio mom. Can’t wait to see where your story takes her & the rest of the gang. Can Jo beat the crap out of Henry & get away w/ it & will she make him forget who kicked his ass. Super job. Great stuff.
Sweetheart, Everyone else has sung you praises. I’ll just thanks you,and post soon and feel better thanks bvh
OMG! Tears came to my eyes more than once. You’re a great storyteller. I can see everything happening in my head in such detail. Keep up the good work!
Oh Janet you broke my heart a littly…why did the kids get a raw deal :( Let Jo hang Henry’s Ts (no not Tina, the other Ts) to dry and Tina deserve her own version for being negligence. Glad Sam took it. A bang-up chapter JM.