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Collision Course 4.26
“Perfectly unobtainable,” laughed Dana.
“She’ll swoop in on a white horse and gallop away with you into the sunset,” said Shane, taking a drag off the joint that she’d just lit.
“God, I hope not, I hate horses,” said Dana with a smirk.
Shane burst into giggles, “It was a metaphor!”
“A meta who? What’s the met for?” asked Dana, simply not getting it at all.
“Never you mind who it’s for…,” laughed Shane again.
“I want to be out, I want to be free, and I want to be in love but I don’t have the courage… I’m a coward, Shane. Pure and fucking simple,” sighed Dana, leaning on Shane’s shoulder. Shane slipped her hand over Dana’s shoulder, accidentally touching Dana’s breast with her long fingertips.
“HEY! Hands of the tata’s Shane!” said Dana, slapping her hands playfully and Shane smiled brightly.
“Like I’d want to touch your… tata’s?” giggled Shane, feeling like everything was overly funny tonight.
“Yeah, off the tatas…,” said Dana, drifting off into her own thoughts.
“You’ll find her, Dana, you will.”
“Shane?”
Shane looked up, seeing Carmen on the bed, still naked, flawless skin appealing and Shane smiled, “Yeah?”
“Are you ok?” asked Carmen, concerned that she wasn’t in bed with her yet. Tears threatened on the rim of Shane’s green chipped eyes.
“Yeah… Carm?”
“Yea?” said Carmen, feeling like something was coming, just the way Shane was looking at her was making her jumpy.
“We have to talk,” began Shane.
“Fuck, you know that’s the second time in a week I get blown off, and when I wake up, I get the ‘we gotta talk’ speech? What? Tell me?” said Carmen angrily.
“Who gave you…,” began Shane, but Carmen jumped up, grabbing her scattered clothes and getting dressed. “Carmen, who?”
“Sam!”
“Sam?”
“Yeah, I… took her out, wanted to try something new, fresh, but you know, you go there first…,” said Carmen with an acid tongue. Shane’s head rocked back as if she’d been slapped, Sam had really kicked Carmen out of bed. “I love you, Shane. I’m always going to love you, so say what you have to say!” Said Carmen, dressed, arms crossed, waiting, and her foot tapping on Shane’s bedroom floor.
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O.K. LOL, I know I mistakenly labeled tomboyish Jo Wheaton an Alpha (an error I think I committed twice in my comments somewhere) Totally forgetting the reason that I loved J&B together so much was that they were so very different. Jo forces Bette to let her hair down. Luv their intense sexual vision/moment. So glad Shane & Carmen called it quits, in this fic they just don’t work. I am wondering about Shane’s monogamy comment, will she get w/ someone who feels the same way or will she want to CHANGE for someone else? Alice & Ro – I think I really like, never thought I would but I do. Great chap.
Okay then… Jo and Bette, I *really* like these two together. And them together… seriously hot. I wonder what else Jo can do? Al + Ro, as good as they can be; tastes great, still (ful)filling. Shane and Carmen… well, the magic is gone, isn’t it? I don’t know wht the two of them need, but I don’t see forever in their horizon. Cheers, I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
So it’s over for Carmen and Shane forever? Say it ain’t so!:(
Okay, I know I said that I just wanted Bette to be happy, whether she was with Tina or not. And…I love her with Jo. Love how Jo is with her, and how accepting and open Bette is with Jo. BUT, I can’t help it…my TiBette heart is aching with saddness, breaking for the couple I always love to see together and happy. How is it that I feel both? Great chapter J…as always. :) Thanks!
yay for jo and bette! u r too humble saying u r not good at sex scenes. that was delicious and hot! poor shane and carmen… maybe sam will still be the one for shane being not monogamous? one can hope…
Vampire sex, huh? Lol. I’m glad Shane did the right thing by Carmen.
Love Bette with Jo,Jo has some good moves. The best way to write a SEX is to do it and write about it,or write it and do it. You do it well anyway . It was a lazy day here so I went to another site and read all 100 + chapters of The Girl Next Door. Love Leigh. Love that alice is taking things one day at a time. thanks bvh
this is great I think there is still a lot more in this story please post soon grat update