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    Collision Course 4.26

    Story written on November 11, 2006 by Janet Marie.
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    Bette & Jo progress in their relationship – Shane does the hard, and the right thing by Carmen – Alice and Ro share a shower – Sam gets a mysterious phone call

     

                Shane scratched her head, thinking, wanting this over with, wanting the walls back up, wanting to stop feeling.  “Carmen, you… you are one of the most breathtaking people I’ve ever met, or been with.”

     

                Carmen’s stance relaxed, maybe Shane wasn’t breaking up with her just yet. 

     

                “You made me want to change want to try and be the person that you wanted me to be, that I could be.  I let you in, and I wasn’t expecting that,” said Shane as she began to pace the room aimlessly.  “I never wanted love, I never went out looking for it, and then you came along.  Barged right in there, knocked all them walls down, and I’ll forever be grateful for that…”

     

                “Jesus mother fucking Christ, you ARE breaking up with me!”

     

                “We needed this, you and me, we needed closure, you know?  To see if it was still real or not…”

     

                “Oh don’t you dare!  Don’t you dare fucking psycho babble me!” ranted Carmen, wanting to clobber Shane so hard in the back of the head that she wouldn’t wake up until next week. 

     

                “I’m not, you were right, I have these, what did you call it, ‘psychotic responses?’ to things and how can I be who you want me to be?  I can’t.  I’m not made the same way you are.  I can’t be monogamous, I’ve proved it, time and time again.  And you know what, Carmen, you can’t be either, you cheated too.”

     

                Carmen’s face paled, having forgotten that she too, had cheated on Shane, and the fact struck her cold.  “Only after…”

     

                “…I cheated?  Yeah, but you did it anyway, is that who we are going to be together?  I do something, you do it back, and visa versa?” asked Shane honestly.

     

                “I don’t know,” whispered Carmen.  “I still love you.”

     

                “I do to, but…  I don’t think we can be together, look at Bette and Tina, they belong together, but they aren’t because they tore each other apart.  You know why?  Because they were who they were, and they tried to change that, I don’t want to change you, and I don’t want to break you,” said Shane honestly.

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    1. O.K. LOL, I know I mistakenly labeled tomboyish Jo Wheaton an Alpha (an error I think I committed twice in my comments somewhere) Totally forgetting the reason that I loved J&B together so much was that they were so very different. Jo forces Bette to let her hair down. Luv their intense sexual vision/moment. So glad Shane & Carmen called it quits, in this fic they just don’t work. I am wondering about Shane’s monogamy comment, will she get w/ someone who feels the same way or will she want to CHANGE for someone else? Alice & Ro – I think I really like, never thought I would but I do. Great chap.

    2. Okay then… Jo and Bette, I *really* like these two together. And them together… seriously hot. I wonder what else Jo can do? Al + Ro, as good as they can be; tastes great, still (ful)filling. Shane and Carmen… well, the magic is gone, isn’t it? I don’t know wht the two of them need, but I don’t see forever in their horizon. Cheers, I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

    4. Okay, I know I said that I just wanted Bette to be happy, whether she was with Tina or not. And…I love her with Jo. Love how Jo is with her, and how accepting and open Bette is with Jo. BUT, I can’t help it…my TiBette heart is aching with saddness, breaking for the couple I always love to see together and happy. How is it that I feel both? Great chapter J…as always. :) Thanks!

    5. yay for jo and bette! u r too humble saying u r not good at sex scenes. that was delicious and hot! poor shane and carmen… maybe sam will still be the one for shane being not monogamous? one can hope…

    7. Love Bette with Jo,Jo has some good moves. The best way to write a SEX is to do it and write about it,or write it and do it. You do it well anyway . It was a lazy day here so I went to another site and read all 100 + chapters of The Girl Next Door. Love Leigh. Love that alice is taking things one day at a time. thanks bvh

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