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Collision Course 4.51 – Foreshadowing
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“I do know how it works,” said Emma ruefully, seeing Bette staring at them, Jo licked her lips, showing off her fangs. “You’re…”
“…yeah, powerless? I think the blade might have killed more than we thought, Emma, I think I’m human again…”
Six Days Later….
“As much as I’d like to say we were all calm, and cool, collected and acting like Bruce Willis in Die Hard, we were scared shitless, fine me for using shitless, I dare you,” said Alice in to the mic.
“So Tina was lying on the ground, Sam and Izzy were making sure she was ok, the rest of us were dialing numbers, hoping to get reception, but that too, seemed to be too much to hope for. After a few minutes, we all realized that calling for help, was a moot point…”
Six Days Earlier….
Rosita hobbled down the street, the plane having taken out at least twelve buildings, leaving more than chaos on the streets, leaving carnage and pain in its wake. People were bumping into her, running away from what had happened, but Rosita moving towards it, because where the plane had come to rest was impossible.
It had sideswiped against the front entrance of The Planet, where Alice and Carmen were having lunch. If it weren’t for bad luck, they’d have none at all.
Six Days Earlier….
Amy Astin took stock of her body without opening her blazing green eyes, feeling like a limp rag doll, blood trickled down her neck, and it wasn’t a welcoming feeling. Opening her eyes now, hot blood stinging her eyes, reaching up with a shaky hand and rubbing her eyes, “Jesus Christ, this sucks.” The former Senator was on the right side of the plane, and the plane she’d been on was lying on its left side.
The sound of panic surrounded her, but Amy, with years of insanity under her belt, was calm. Assessing the situation, knowing she couldn’t just unbuckle the seatbelt, reaching for the seat in front of her, grabbing hold of it with her left hand, and unlatching the belt with the right. Grasping the seat with her right hand also, gingerly finding foot holds to clamber down to something that was like solid ground.
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JP – What frakking award are you talking about girl? I think Jo’s gotten to you somehow… award… Ok girl… LOL
Would like to say something about the awards but I afraid the sex faries will leave me. Dont let Jo lose her powers and Jack fron 24 wasnt the hero in this the ladies were. Love the minor danages to the gang,Shane will think about this for a long time to come. What happen to the people on the plane?? I know you are busy thanks for posting. thanks bvh
Good stuff! I like how you meld and twist so many storylines. Looking forward to the next installment.
I know..I know..you don’t want the award. Well, to damn bad! Deal with it Ms. JM, you are f*#king good, and deserve it. So, smile, say thank you and then post the next chapter!!! LOL Hugs J…really, congratulations. You know how much I wanted you to win. :)
Love how you wrote the past vs. the present/future events. Gotta admit when you bring Amy into the mix, I get a tad bit confused as to which lady Jo should be with. Alice, please keep your mouth shut, for once? Lovin’ it!
WooHOO!!!!!! JACK BAUER OF CTU!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA great job!! LOVED IT! i took my hands away long enough to read. So now of course Al is going to talk to Jo about what happened. and poor Jo with a broken leg and all. Very cool update!!! LOVED IT!!!
Great chap. You wrote that extremely well. I dont like Amy, i hope she doesnt cause any problems for my fave couple. So Jo is human again huh? Thanks for the update, PPS.
YES! I’ve been hoping for a chapter for what’s felt like an interminably long time… Thanks for posting… Now then, about the chapter: Ha! for once Jack wasn’t the hero! I really want Al to be able to keep her mouth shut. She can NOT blab about Jo… And on that note, I don’t want Jo’s powers to be diminished, or completely gone. Hey, what about the other people on the plane, they alright? And what’s the gang going to do without the Planet? I guess they could use Twilight as the new hangout… Great chapter, Janet, and many congratulations on the award!
whatever the fucking award is… give it to the lady!! u deserve it! all of it!!! OMG! what an episode… intense man, just totally intense… every moment it’s BAM!,WOW!,BOOM!,KAPOW!,YOWZA!… ETC! amazing janet. simply amazing… i really do wish i have your talent in writing and ideas… PPS!
Also, I am not as stupid as I look sometimes, – I meant accolade’s
OMG – JM, I am soooo sorry about the award. It will be okay, you may get many interview requests and when it comes to the book, I say hold out for the bidding war… F tina. (F = forget, it just looked naughtier the other way)——————————Could Shanes lips get any sexier? Bette & Tina, Amy & Jo turn to each other at a time of crises? We all know what a tease your are. Run Rosita Run!Seriously congrats on the award you deserve all the aculades you can receive.
Well thanks for the history lesson there J, though your answer wasn’t as fun as the one I got from my mate (“they” speak French cause they thought they were so cool that they needed to lower their cool levels cause the cool mixed with the snow weather coldness would have made for and uninhabitable arctic environment, so they picked the most assy language in the world to speak… he had a bad incident with the french) I have a feeling yours might hinge on accuracy. Was watching 24 this evening, have you ever considered what a Jack Bower dwarf would be like, most kick ass little package ever. Pistol whipping bad ass midget….with a really deep voice. Any way props to the award, which means you write good. And props to the whole not turning you characters into corpses thing. Have a nice day :-)
Oh and whats the story with the dude and the chick written by the guy? is it Zorro? Zorro is awsome :-p
thanks for your story JM. i really like it and glad you added another poem. i usually don’t leave comments but i do read the stories.most of my comments sound stupid.