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Collision Course 4.51 – Foreshadowing
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“I agree, but…,” began Jo. Emma nodded, telling Jo that it was safe for Quin to be slamming metal against metal. “Fine, swing away… just remember, there were people in that plane…”
“Oh fuck, I hadn’t thought of that,” said Carmen who was huddled with everyone else. Lara rubbed her back, and Carmen put her head on Lara’s shoulder.
“I’m not dying here,” said Quin swinging the ax with as much force as humanly possible, after a few swings, she realized it was going to take her an eternity to cut just one hole, but she kept swinging anyway. She was, after all, a Peabody and Peabody’s never gave up without a fight.
Six Days Later….
“Outside of our little world, our planet, Rosita Navarro, a very close friend, was outside of The Planet. Trying to find a way into the place where we were, only to find that it was going to prove to me a more difficult task than she’d ever expected,” said Alice into the mic.
Six Days Earlier….
Rosita limped and rushed towards something she couldn’t quite believe, a plane, a commercial airplane, no less. Having retrieved a gun from the trunk of her car, tucked away safely in her back pocket, Rosita was on a mission. One that she gladly took on, getting to Carmen and Alice before anything else happened to them.
A gaggle of people rushed by her, and one slammed into Rosita hard, sending her crashing onto the ground, a blonde man, his face weathered but handsome, bent down, “Let me help you.”
“Thanks,” said Rosita, getting up and feeling the gun dropping from the waist band of her jeans. “Fuck!”
She bent down at the waist, picking up the gun, moving to stand, she turned and found the barrel of a gun staring back at her, “Put the gun down, slowly….,” said the man.
“I got a permit,” said Rosita in an easy voice. This was the problem with a crisis, people they turned into cavemen.
“I don’t care, put the gun down!” he yelled.
Rosita spread her arms away from her; letting the gun flip over from her fingers. Angling the butt of the gun towards the irate blonde man, she offered it to him. “I’m going to give it to you, because, if you hadn’t noticed, the place is going nuts, and I don’t want a gun flying around on the pavement, si?” said Rosita softly. The man reached for the gun, as he did, Rosita flipped the gun back into her hand and pushed towards the man, grabbing at his gun, they were now face to face, each pointing a weapon at each other. “Listen to me, my name is Rosita Navarro, and I can see ya a guy who knows what he’s doing, I’m an ex Army brat and I’m just looking to find my friend, that’s it.”
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JP – What frakking award are you talking about girl? I think Jo’s gotten to you somehow… award… Ok girl… LOL
Would like to say something about the awards but I afraid the sex faries will leave me. Dont let Jo lose her powers and Jack fron 24 wasnt the hero in this the ladies were. Love the minor danages to the gang,Shane will think about this for a long time to come. What happen to the people on the plane?? I know you are busy thanks for posting. thanks bvh
Good stuff! I like how you meld and twist so many storylines. Looking forward to the next installment.
I know..I know..you don’t want the award. Well, to damn bad! Deal with it Ms. JM, you are f*#king good, and deserve it. So, smile, say thank you and then post the next chapter!!! LOL Hugs J…really, congratulations. You know how much I wanted you to win. :)
Love how you wrote the past vs. the present/future events. Gotta admit when you bring Amy into the mix, I get a tad bit confused as to which lady Jo should be with. Alice, please keep your mouth shut, for once? Lovin’ it!
WooHOO!!!!!! JACK BAUER OF CTU!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA great job!! LOVED IT! i took my hands away long enough to read. So now of course Al is going to talk to Jo about what happened. and poor Jo with a broken leg and all. Very cool update!!! LOVED IT!!!
Great chap. You wrote that extremely well. I dont like Amy, i hope she doesnt cause any problems for my fave couple. So Jo is human again huh? Thanks for the update, PPS.
YES! I’ve been hoping for a chapter for what’s felt like an interminably long time… Thanks for posting… Now then, about the chapter: Ha! for once Jack wasn’t the hero! I really want Al to be able to keep her mouth shut. She can NOT blab about Jo… And on that note, I don’t want Jo’s powers to be diminished, or completely gone. Hey, what about the other people on the plane, they alright? And what’s the gang going to do without the Planet? I guess they could use Twilight as the new hangout… Great chapter, Janet, and many congratulations on the award!
whatever the fucking award is… give it to the lady!! u deserve it! all of it!!! OMG! what an episode… intense man, just totally intense… every moment it’s BAM!,WOW!,BOOM!,KAPOW!,YOWZA!… ETC! amazing janet. simply amazing… i really do wish i have your talent in writing and ideas… PPS!
Also, I am not as stupid as I look sometimes, – I meant accolade’s
OMG – JM, I am soooo sorry about the award. It will be okay, you may get many interview requests and when it comes to the book, I say hold out for the bidding war… F tina. (F = forget, it just looked naughtier the other way)——————————Could Shanes lips get any sexier? Bette & Tina, Amy & Jo turn to each other at a time of crises? We all know what a tease your are. Run Rosita Run!Seriously congrats on the award you deserve all the aculades you can receive.
Well thanks for the history lesson there J, though your answer wasn’t as fun as the one I got from my mate (“they” speak French cause they thought they were so cool that they needed to lower their cool levels cause the cool mixed with the snow weather coldness would have made for and uninhabitable arctic environment, so they picked the most assy language in the world to speak… he had a bad incident with the french) I have a feeling yours might hinge on accuracy. Was watching 24 this evening, have you ever considered what a Jack Bower dwarf would be like, most kick ass little package ever. Pistol whipping bad ass midget….with a really deep voice. Any way props to the award, which means you write good. And props to the whole not turning you characters into corpses thing. Have a nice day :-)
Oh and whats the story with the dude and the chick written by the guy? is it Zorro? Zorro is awsome :-p
thanks for your story JM. i really like it and glad you added another poem. i usually don’t leave comments but i do read the stories.most of my comments sound stupid.