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Collision Course 4.51 – Foreshadowing
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“That, mon amour, is to be expected,” chuckled Jo, winking and nestling into the pillow. “Now, shhhh, Alice is talking.”
Six Days Earlier…..
Rosita eyed the fake leg in the corner, teasing her, beckoning her, mocking her, her dark eyes red from the tears she’d been spilling, olive cheeks streaked with misery. Looking at her watch, chewing the inside of her cheek and getting up, swinging her good leg over the side of the bed, the remainder of her left leg dangling there. Lucky, that was what they’d told her, she still had her knee, looking again at the leg, grabbing the crutches with a hard grunt, and retrieving the leg from its place of rest.
If it were up to her, she wouldn’t even bother, but then, she couldn’t hobble around on crutches for the rest of her life, now could she? Placing the fitted sock over her stub, and strapping the temporary leg into place, jaw bulging as she did so. Her therapist, or rather, TERROR-pist, had told her not to use the leg, only during rehab, but Rosita wasn’t good at following orders, unless she was wearing a uniform. Standing, testing her weight, the shorts not hiding the fact that she was a one legged freak, but why hide who, and what, you are?
Closing her eyes as she stood in her room, swallowing hard, wanting to go back in time, change the fate of the world, of herself, but not being able too. Mysterious black eyes snapping open, taking a deep breath, wondering who she really was.
She was a woman who loved Alice, who was lost, but knew that she’d find herself again, so instead of hiding, Rosita decided to get moving, can’t catch you when you move, she thought to herself. Ro retrieved the cane from behind the door, and limping out of the room, and to her car, taking her time down the stairs, waving good bye to Juan and making her way to The Planet, needing to see Alice.
A block and a half from The Planet, the traffic slowed, and Rosita contemplated dropping the top of the convertible, but decided against it. The radio blared a Nickelback song, heavy pounding bass, and then Rosita heard it, buzzing.
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JP – What frakking award are you talking about girl? I think Jo’s gotten to you somehow… award… Ok girl… LOL
Would like to say something about the awards but I afraid the sex faries will leave me. Dont let Jo lose her powers and Jack fron 24 wasnt the hero in this the ladies were. Love the minor danages to the gang,Shane will think about this for a long time to come. What happen to the people on the plane?? I know you are busy thanks for posting. thanks bvh
Good stuff! I like how you meld and twist so many storylines. Looking forward to the next installment.
I know..I know..you don’t want the award. Well, to damn bad! Deal with it Ms. JM, you are f*#king good, and deserve it. So, smile, say thank you and then post the next chapter!!! LOL Hugs J…really, congratulations. You know how much I wanted you to win. :)
Love how you wrote the past vs. the present/future events. Gotta admit when you bring Amy into the mix, I get a tad bit confused as to which lady Jo should be with. Alice, please keep your mouth shut, for once? Lovin’ it!
WooHOO!!!!!! JACK BAUER OF CTU!!! HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA great job!! LOVED IT! i took my hands away long enough to read. So now of course Al is going to talk to Jo about what happened. and poor Jo with a broken leg and all. Very cool update!!! LOVED IT!!!
Great chap. You wrote that extremely well. I dont like Amy, i hope she doesnt cause any problems for my fave couple. So Jo is human again huh? Thanks for the update, PPS.
YES! I’ve been hoping for a chapter for what’s felt like an interminably long time… Thanks for posting… Now then, about the chapter: Ha! for once Jack wasn’t the hero! I really want Al to be able to keep her mouth shut. She can NOT blab about Jo… And on that note, I don’t want Jo’s powers to be diminished, or completely gone. Hey, what about the other people on the plane, they alright? And what’s the gang going to do without the Planet? I guess they could use Twilight as the new hangout… Great chapter, Janet, and many congratulations on the award!
whatever the fucking award is… give it to the lady!! u deserve it! all of it!!! OMG! what an episode… intense man, just totally intense… every moment it’s BAM!,WOW!,BOOM!,KAPOW!,YOWZA!… ETC! amazing janet. simply amazing… i really do wish i have your talent in writing and ideas… PPS!
Also, I am not as stupid as I look sometimes, – I meant accolade’s
OMG – JM, I am soooo sorry about the award. It will be okay, you may get many interview requests and when it comes to the book, I say hold out for the bidding war… F tina. (F = forget, it just looked naughtier the other way)——————————Could Shanes lips get any sexier? Bette & Tina, Amy & Jo turn to each other at a time of crises? We all know what a tease your are. Run Rosita Run!Seriously congrats on the award you deserve all the aculades you can receive.
Well thanks for the history lesson there J, though your answer wasn’t as fun as the one I got from my mate (“they” speak French cause they thought they were so cool that they needed to lower their cool levels cause the cool mixed with the snow weather coldness would have made for and uninhabitable arctic environment, so they picked the most assy language in the world to speak… he had a bad incident with the french) I have a feeling yours might hinge on accuracy. Was watching 24 this evening, have you ever considered what a Jack Bower dwarf would be like, most kick ass little package ever. Pistol whipping bad ass midget….with a really deep voice. Any way props to the award, which means you write good. And props to the whole not turning you characters into corpses thing. Have a nice day :-)
Oh and whats the story with the dude and the chick written by the guy? is it Zorro? Zorro is awsome :-p
thanks for your story JM. i really like it and glad you added another poem. i usually don’t leave comments but i do read the stories.most of my comments sound stupid.