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Collision Course 4.58
“No, your friend needs you, she needs her sounding boards,” answered the former senator. “Shane might very well need someone who has a child to give her advice, there are legal matters to be mindful of also.”
“You are pretty good at this stuff,” smiled Tina touching Amy’s hand as they whispered in low voices to each other.
“I do know my stuff,” countered Amy as they moved over to the Jacuzzi, everyone starting to whisper and talk about Shay, the newest addition to the fold. Carmen thought he was cute, Lara was saying how much she thought he looked like Shane. Alice was shaking her head the whole time, not talking, turning the flask upside down, finding that it was empty.
“Shane cannot keep ‘im,” said Alice taking a drink from Rosita and Ro sat behind Alice, who was already in the water, having stripped down to her underwear and bra. Ro looked down at her leg, the prosthetic one, trying to remember when she’d last charged the battery. Mindful to not get it wet, she sat back, thinking how much of a brat that Alice was being tonight.
“Why not?” asked both Carmen and Rosita at the same time. Family was a big thing to the both of them, if it hadn’t been for family, neither Carmen nor Rosita would have turned out the way they had. Loyal, a good work ethic, confident and loving individuals.
“Shane and kid, they don’t equal,” countered Alice it was an utterly insane idea that Shane could be a parent.
“Oh give her a break, this just happened, sure, Shane isn’t perfect, but she might surprise us,” said Bette slipping off her shoes and then sliding into the Jacuzzi. Jo didn’t move closer, staying behind, sitting in one of the chairs next to the barbecue pit. The pensive looked was plastered on her face.
Tina and Amy moved to the Jacuzzi, Tina getting in and Amy hanging behind her, there wasn’t enough places for everyone in the large Jacuzzi, so each of the couples just got as comfortable as they could. Lara leaned down and kissed Carmen’s long exposed neck, and Carmen leaned back into her, comfortable in her arms. Helena fumed over Quin’s true words because it was true, she’d always been caviler about her life and her money, and now, she cherished the things that she did have. Quin had disappeared to the far end of the yard, talking to someone on her phone, it had been buzzing in the limo, but Quin hadn’t answered it. Now she was talking to someone in a hushed voice, looking extremely annoyed.
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Another great chapter! It is amazing how Bette and Tina can be at each others throats one minute and then smiling with each other the next. Hmmmmm!!! LOL If nothing else, I am persistent!! Thanks!! Oh…and spot on dialogue!!!
Yes it’s me ^>^. I just happen to read this chap twice to get whats really going on. Quin & Tina meow!!
Dont want Amy with Tina. will just get her a wee bit closer to Jo. guess Bette will need to do something to get Amy away from Jo Like kick butt. Now Alice is being a complete ass. Tina and Quin I can see that. They might think Quin is to young,or Tina is to old but looks like a good match. Helena seen rather bitter. Oh yes will have the complete shoulder the morning of the 25th. I can type you a comment it I do it with my toes.(Joke). thanks for posting. San is my favorite person thanks bvh
Really feel for Quin, temptation can be a bitch. The devil on my shoulder is saying she should “Go for it!” LOL. I was waiting for Bette to lose it, Amy would piss anyone off. Although its impled that Bette was upset over Tina I thought she was angry over Amy constantly invading her personal life, (Jo, her friends etc.) not necessarily Amy’s relationship w/ Tina. Tina should tell Quin how she feels, I’m sure she’d get a positive response from Quin. Alice’s mouth is a ticking time bomb, thank goodness no one payed attention to her drunken rambling. Terrific stuff, already wanting more.
I guess the last snore can count as the last word, lol. She certainly has a big mouth when she’s drunk.
I love that I have absolutely no idea where each of your chapters will lead. Glad that Bette went to Jo, despite her misgivings, and could say just the right thing. Thank wink you had Jo give Amy was just plain cruel.
Amy’s still making a play for Jo. We’ll see what Bette’s going to do about that… Shane will most def get the hang of parenting. Her determination that Shay not be put into foster care alone will see to that. So! Tina wants Quin for sure, does she? I see she’s rushing off to look at the dailies so that she can get her fill. Becca has *got* to back off Tina’s woman. There, I said it again! LOL @ drunk Alice getting shut up by Ro, then by Jo. I know Alice is going to fully blab, sooner or later, and it’s going to be a disaster. Maybe Bette can shut her up? Cos I don’t think Al is quite scared enough of Jo… Great chapter, Janet, thank you!
A little Sam and Shane can make my day! Jo and Amy made me nervous for Bette, then Bette of course Bette shows why everone loves Bette…hat was great! Wow, Becca wanted to cheat with Quin? Alice shouldn’t drink she was getting a little mean girls on the vodka. Loved the update as always thanks.
Quite good