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Collision Course 4.77
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Jo put her back to the wall, ShadowWalking through it, her eyes a blaze of amber as she grew solid again, only a few feet from Gabe. Putting her finger to her lips again, seeing Shay staring right at her, Angelica had rested her head on Jarrod’s lap and was sleeping. Gabe was talking on his cell phone, obviously to Shane, Jo waited a moment. He was about to turn, and Jo grinned; she was going to love putting this asshole down, he turned, and Jo lashed out, catching him in the temple. “Hitting a pregnant woman, not very nice, are you?” asked Jo as Gabe hit the ground hard. Angelica jumping up, Shay grabbed her, pushing Jarrod into the small bathroom as Emma burst into the room. “You know,” said Jo darkly, lashing out hard with her right leg, sending Gabe slamming into the wall almost ten feet away. “It’s assholes like you that make the world a shitty place for these kids to grow up in…”
Jo!” yelled Emma, rushing into the room and pushing Jo back, a hand on Jo’s chest. Jo looked down at the hand, an evil smile on her face. “Stop.”
Jo’s jaw worked hard, trying to calm the demon inside, wanting to tear Gabe’s head off and drink from the sputtering arteries, “Jo!” yelled Angelica, rushing at Jo, and vaulting into Jo’s arms. Jo wrapped her arms around her, her amber lit eyes instantly fading to blue, the evil look disappeared and Angelica wrapped her arms around Jo’s neck. “I knew you were coming, I knew you were! I could hear it… and Spencer too…”
Jo’s eyes grew serious, Emma was moving to Gabe, her handcuffs out, Emma righted herself, concern in Emma’s eyes, Angelica had ‘heard’ them? “Angie, you heard?”
“Uh huh, Spence was in my room… I could hear her… I’m so glad you came!” giggled the almost three year old, her voice sounding older, and wiser. Jo licked her lips, shuddering, waving at Jarrod and Shay.
“Boys, come on, Bette and Tina are on their way,” said Jo roughly. Emma slapped the cuffs on Gabe, her eyes still serious at the revelation that Angelica had heard what had transpired, but that was something that could always be dealt with later.
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And you don’t think THIS is real fiction?!!!! You may think of this as practice, but I enjoy every word of your story, real fiction of not. So hurry up, I want to read some more! ;)
yes, you are killing me with your slow, torturous twists… but it is such an enjoyable demise! As for your practice, it certainly does make perfect. Can’t wait for your next post. I’ve got my seatbelt tightened for the bumpy ride!!
I’ve been checking every day this week for your update after your cruel and unusual cliffhanger last week. Was worth the wait! This story is great. That frikking frakking Gab is a piece of work. Can’t wait for next chapter’s “huge turn”. Thanks for writing! :D
I can never post right after reading coz I need to rest!!!!! It’s remarkable that you have better stuff than this that you save for your other fiction.Hmmm…Matching auras for those in love or who PROCLAIM (another hmmmm)to be in love? Angie could hear Jo and Spencer? That wasn’t Angie last adventure? Where the heck are you heading? You should consider rating your chapters to prepare the readers–something like–“TT” (lots of twists and turns), “TN” (the plot is so dense and so many chatacters appear that you should take notes), “DM” (death and mayhem ensue), and “ASS” (you have to be an IDIOT to think you know where this chapter is heading).As I read, I can feel the relentless tug of destiny and I think I should start feeling sorry for these flies caught in your web.
Gabe so needed taken down… Jo ROCKS!!! I do wish she’d forgive Bette though. I guess in time? But it’s been pretty much underlined that they aren’t ever going to be together again, so that’s that. I’ll let it go and move on, like Bette. I wonder about Angelica though… what was up with that? Girl got powers? Wedding bells… for whom? Noooooo, I don’t want for Quin to go back down that road… I hope she stops at the one. I really do. Loved it as always, JM. And Spumoni’s rating system… that was classic. Thanks for the post! Next one is soon-ish, yes? Cheers
Quinn fell off the wagon, why? Pretty please let her fall be temporary, JM. more Jo ’till…(Huh)? Since its plot oriented I won’t bitch. Shane should get her cut looked at. Gotta love how Angie was oblivious to the whole kidnapping thing, & her waving to cars passing bye was too cute. My favorite line though came surprisingly from Tina when she tells Bette, “You’re always going to have me, stop being melodramatic.”
Yes my Dear this is another WOW. If you write any better,my poor old heart couldn’t stand it. Angie is so smart. Jo is my hero. Bette knows it time to start living her life again. Lets talk about Quin,that is a No No. She will find the right woman,it just wasn’t Tina. Oh,before I go to bed Gabe is so low the sewer runs over him. The sorry sucker. Thanks have a nice Sunday thanks bvh
Great update. It’s got it all…action, suspense, romance, and little of the otherworldly, too. You rock!
This is the ONLY story I read that Bette isn’t with Tina. I do hope Jo and Bette can have a happy ending.
that was great can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon
If this isn’t real fiction, then I don’t know what is. Like Bette, I too wonder where this leaves them all. So what’s up with Angie and her supernatural talents? So who will Bette move on to?