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Collision Course 4.77
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Lara was pacing the floor right along with Shane, the wound on Shane’s head was bleeding slightly, it needed stitches but Shane refused to leave the house. One of the FBI agents grabbed at his cell phone, looking around panicked, Lara was feeling like the walls were closing in on her.
“You bring a million in cash and I’ll give him back to you… no cops, Shane, because there are two kids here that I don’t care about…,” reminded Gabe.
“Mother fucker,” grumbled Shane. “Where?” she blared into the phone.
“I’ll give you until five to get the money, and then I’ll call back…,” he began, then the phone dropped to the ground. Shane gave a startled look, turning and glaring at the FBI agent in charge. He shrugged, then the line went dead and Shane sat down on the chair.
“He’s gonna hurt Angelica or Jarrod, mother fucking son of a bitch…,” said Shane, deflated and Lara moved to her, putting an arm around her.
“He’ll call back…,” said Lara reassuringly.
“No, he won’t,” said the FBI agent whose cell phone had rung.
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“Jo you can’t just JUMP out of the helicopter!” yelled Emma as Jo took the headgear off, blinking rapidly to adjust her sight. “I don’t care what kind of spell I put on them, they are going to remember you jumping out of the helicopter!”
“Yes I can, I’m a fucking blood sucking vampire, who walks around in the daylight, I can do anything I want, and might I remind you, that you’re not my boss,” reminded Jo with a glint of the mischievous rogue that Jo’d been.
“What about them?” asked Emma, pointing to the pilots who were looking back at them, not hearing a word they were saying.
“Ohhhh, you can fix their memories later, and you said they are jinxed, they won’t remember it anyway, Harry Potter them, live a little,” said Jo her eyes flashing from blue to amber and back again. “I’m going to get Angie now…”
“Jo!” yelled Emma, grabbing at her, snatching the front of her tee shirt, pulling her back into the helicopter, the pilots now yelling at them to stop jostling around in the back of the helicopter, still hovering over the old run down building. Emma saw the look in Jo’s eyes, and it was what had been missing since Bette had injected her, it was the first signs of life. Emma yanked her close, spontaneously kissing her, tearing off the headset and pushing the both of them out of the helicopter, much to the dismay of the two pilots, who’d later forget that they’d ever seen anything anyway.
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And you don’t think THIS is real fiction?!!!! You may think of this as practice, but I enjoy every word of your story, real fiction of not. So hurry up, I want to read some more! ;)
yes, you are killing me with your slow, torturous twists… but it is such an enjoyable demise! As for your practice, it certainly does make perfect. Can’t wait for your next post. I’ve got my seatbelt tightened for the bumpy ride!!
I’ve been checking every day this week for your update after your cruel and unusual cliffhanger last week. Was worth the wait! This story is great. That frikking frakking Gab is a piece of work. Can’t wait for next chapter’s “huge turn”. Thanks for writing! :D
I can never post right after reading coz I need to rest!!!!! It’s remarkable that you have better stuff than this that you save for your other fiction.Hmmm…Matching auras for those in love or who PROCLAIM (another hmmmm)to be in love? Angie could hear Jo and Spencer? That wasn’t Angie last adventure? Where the heck are you heading? You should consider rating your chapters to prepare the readers–something like–“TT” (lots of twists and turns), “TN” (the plot is so dense and so many chatacters appear that you should take notes), “DM” (death and mayhem ensue), and “ASS” (you have to be an IDIOT to think you know where this chapter is heading).As I read, I can feel the relentless tug of destiny and I think I should start feeling sorry for these flies caught in your web.
Gabe so needed taken down… Jo ROCKS!!! I do wish she’d forgive Bette though. I guess in time? But it’s been pretty much underlined that they aren’t ever going to be together again, so that’s that. I’ll let it go and move on, like Bette. I wonder about Angelica though… what was up with that? Girl got powers? Wedding bells… for whom? Noooooo, I don’t want for Quin to go back down that road… I hope she stops at the one. I really do. Loved it as always, JM. And Spumoni’s rating system… that was classic. Thanks for the post! Next one is soon-ish, yes? Cheers
Quinn fell off the wagon, why? Pretty please let her fall be temporary, JM. more Jo ’till…(Huh)? Since its plot oriented I won’t bitch. Shane should get her cut looked at. Gotta love how Angie was oblivious to the whole kidnapping thing, & her waving to cars passing bye was too cute. My favorite line though came surprisingly from Tina when she tells Bette, “You’re always going to have me, stop being melodramatic.”
Yes my Dear this is another WOW. If you write any better,my poor old heart couldn’t stand it. Angie is so smart. Jo is my hero. Bette knows it time to start living her life again. Lets talk about Quin,that is a No No. She will find the right woman,it just wasn’t Tina. Oh,before I go to bed Gabe is so low the sewer runs over him. The sorry sucker. Thanks have a nice Sunday thanks bvh
Great update. It’s got it all…action, suspense, romance, and little of the otherworldly, too. You rock!
This is the ONLY story I read that Bette isn’t with Tina. I do hope Jo and Bette can have a happy ending.
that was great can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon
If this isn’t real fiction, then I don’t know what is. Like Bette, I too wonder where this leaves them all. So what’s up with Angie and her supernatural talents? So who will Bette move on to?