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Collision Course 4.77
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“Shane…,” said Lara her eyes falling on the pair of feet that were protruding from the now empty parking spot. “Call 911!” shouted Lara as she darted towards Shane, her sneakers finding purchase on the pavement, her red hair flying away from her face as she ran hard. Behind her, Paige began dialing the phone, looking around, realizing that her son may well have just been kidnapped; the realization rocked the single mother who would do anything for her son.
Lara landed on her knees next to Shane, who was face down on the dirty pavement, “Shane… Shane…,” said Lara. Pushing back Shane’s hair, finding blood on her now shaking fingers, “Oh god, Shane, damn you, what the hell is going on?”
A light moan escaped Shane as Lara cradled her head, turning her onto her back as gently as she could. Paige came running to find Shane bleeding lightly from just above her ear, “The police are on the way, I told them that there are three children in the car, are the kids here? Please tell me that they are here? They aren’t, I saw Jarrod, oh my god, Shane, who took our kids!”
“They aren’t,” said Lara softly, “Here….” Lara gave her cell phone to Paige, “You need to call Tina, Bette and everyone, this is bad, so bad…” Lara held Shane, trying to coo her awake but to no avail.
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One Hour Later….
“What are we going to do?” lamented Bette as she paced the parking lot where Angelica, Shay and Jarrod had been kidnapped from. “Are they looking for Shane’s truck? Have they even gotten the license plate number from Shane? Why isn’t anyone talking to us any more? They get our statement and then just leave us here to simmer and wonder and worry!”
“Calm down, yes they have, and that officer over there is going to update us in a few minutes,” said Tina as she wringed her hands in front of her. “Give them a minute, I know I’m as freaked out as you are, but keeping a cool head is going to be our only saving grace.”
“What is taking them so long….,” blasted Bette, wringing her hands in front of her, mirroring Tina’s actions without thought, panic rising in not only her voice, but her body was a live wire of anxiety. “I’m going over there.”
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And you don’t think THIS is real fiction?!!!! You may think of this as practice, but I enjoy every word of your story, real fiction of not. So hurry up, I want to read some more! ;)
yes, you are killing me with your slow, torturous twists… but it is such an enjoyable demise! As for your practice, it certainly does make perfect. Can’t wait for your next post. I’ve got my seatbelt tightened for the bumpy ride!!
I’ve been checking every day this week for your update after your cruel and unusual cliffhanger last week. Was worth the wait! This story is great. That frikking frakking Gab is a piece of work. Can’t wait for next chapter’s “huge turn”. Thanks for writing! :D
I can never post right after reading coz I need to rest!!!!! It’s remarkable that you have better stuff than this that you save for your other fiction.Hmmm…Matching auras for those in love or who PROCLAIM (another hmmmm)to be in love? Angie could hear Jo and Spencer? That wasn’t Angie last adventure? Where the heck are you heading? You should consider rating your chapters to prepare the readers–something like–“TT” (lots of twists and turns), “TN” (the plot is so dense and so many chatacters appear that you should take notes), “DM” (death and mayhem ensue), and “ASS” (you have to be an IDIOT to think you know where this chapter is heading).As I read, I can feel the relentless tug of destiny and I think I should start feeling sorry for these flies caught in your web.
Gabe so needed taken down… Jo ROCKS!!! I do wish she’d forgive Bette though. I guess in time? But it’s been pretty much underlined that they aren’t ever going to be together again, so that’s that. I’ll let it go and move on, like Bette. I wonder about Angelica though… what was up with that? Girl got powers? Wedding bells… for whom? Noooooo, I don’t want for Quin to go back down that road… I hope she stops at the one. I really do. Loved it as always, JM. And Spumoni’s rating system… that was classic. Thanks for the post! Next one is soon-ish, yes? Cheers
Quinn fell off the wagon, why? Pretty please let her fall be temporary, JM. more Jo ’till…(Huh)? Since its plot oriented I won’t bitch. Shane should get her cut looked at. Gotta love how Angie was oblivious to the whole kidnapping thing, & her waving to cars passing bye was too cute. My favorite line though came surprisingly from Tina when she tells Bette, “You’re always going to have me, stop being melodramatic.”
Yes my Dear this is another WOW. If you write any better,my poor old heart couldn’t stand it. Angie is so smart. Jo is my hero. Bette knows it time to start living her life again. Lets talk about Quin,that is a No No. She will find the right woman,it just wasn’t Tina. Oh,before I go to bed Gabe is so low the sewer runs over him. The sorry sucker. Thanks have a nice Sunday thanks bvh
Great update. It’s got it all…action, suspense, romance, and little of the otherworldly, too. You rock!
This is the ONLY story I read that Bette isn’t with Tina. I do hope Jo and Bette can have a happy ending.
that was great can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon
If this isn’t real fiction, then I don’t know what is. Like Bette, I too wonder where this leaves them all. So what’s up with Angie and her supernatural talents? So who will Bette move on to?