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Collision Course 4.77
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“Is that Emma?” asked Tina, grabbing Bette’s arm as she was about to move towards a police officer. Two women walked over to the FBI Agent who was in charge. Tina caught a glimpse of Emma, the Asian woman was hard to miss in a sharp suit and sensible shoes.
“It is,” said Bette hopefully. “Good, we might get somewhere.”
Emma walked over to where Shane had fallen, her hand finding the spot, turning to her companion and shaking her head. Then Bette gasped as the companion turned, wearing dark sunglasses, a hat that was on backwards, wearing faded jeans and a black tee shirt, it was Jo.
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“Stop screaming,” yelled Gabe McCutcheon at the boys and the young girl in the back of the SUV. “I’m not going to hurt you!”
“Dad you hit Shane! She’s pregnant, what if you hurt her? Turn around, I want to see my sister!” demanded Shay, unbuckling his seatbelt and turning to look out the window, knowing he wasn’t going to see Shane, but hoping nonetheless.
“You bring me back to my mom, you fucker!” yelled Jarrod. The only one who was calm was Angelica, because she didn’t know what was going on. Staring at the cars next to the SUV, waving every once in a while, thinking they were just on a joy ride with a nice stranger.
“Shut up, all of you, or I’ll drop you off on the side of the road! Shut up, shut up, I thought you’d be alone Shay, god damn it, shut up!” blared Gabe, his hand running through his messy hair, his eyes wild as he tried to figure out what to do.
“Swearing bad,” announced Angelica. “Hi.”
“Hello,” said Gabe. “Who’s the kid?”
“Angelica, Dad, what are you doing?” asked Shay his hand sneaking into his back pocket and pulling out his cell phone. It was already on vibrate, so he knew it wasn’t going to alert his father.
“Your sister got a nice slice of change from that girlfriend of hers, and I think we deserve some of that, don’t you think, son?” asked Gabe as he merge into traffic and onto the highway.
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And you don’t think THIS is real fiction?!!!! You may think of this as practice, but I enjoy every word of your story, real fiction of not. So hurry up, I want to read some more! ;)
yes, you are killing me with your slow, torturous twists… but it is such an enjoyable demise! As for your practice, it certainly does make perfect. Can’t wait for your next post. I’ve got my seatbelt tightened for the bumpy ride!!
I’ve been checking every day this week for your update after your cruel and unusual cliffhanger last week. Was worth the wait! This story is great. That frikking frakking Gab is a piece of work. Can’t wait for next chapter’s “huge turn”. Thanks for writing! :D
I can never post right after reading coz I need to rest!!!!! It’s remarkable that you have better stuff than this that you save for your other fiction.Hmmm…Matching auras for those in love or who PROCLAIM (another hmmmm)to be in love? Angie could hear Jo and Spencer? That wasn’t Angie last adventure? Where the heck are you heading? You should consider rating your chapters to prepare the readers–something like–“TT” (lots of twists and turns), “TN” (the plot is so dense and so many chatacters appear that you should take notes), “DM” (death and mayhem ensue), and “ASS” (you have to be an IDIOT to think you know where this chapter is heading).As I read, I can feel the relentless tug of destiny and I think I should start feeling sorry for these flies caught in your web.
Gabe so needed taken down… Jo ROCKS!!! I do wish she’d forgive Bette though. I guess in time? But it’s been pretty much underlined that they aren’t ever going to be together again, so that’s that. I’ll let it go and move on, like Bette. I wonder about Angelica though… what was up with that? Girl got powers? Wedding bells… for whom? Noooooo, I don’t want for Quin to go back down that road… I hope she stops at the one. I really do. Loved it as always, JM. And Spumoni’s rating system… that was classic. Thanks for the post! Next one is soon-ish, yes? Cheers
Quinn fell off the wagon, why? Pretty please let her fall be temporary, JM. more Jo ’till…(Huh)? Since its plot oriented I won’t bitch. Shane should get her cut looked at. Gotta love how Angie was oblivious to the whole kidnapping thing, & her waving to cars passing bye was too cute. My favorite line though came surprisingly from Tina when she tells Bette, “You’re always going to have me, stop being melodramatic.”
Yes my Dear this is another WOW. If you write any better,my poor old heart couldn’t stand it. Angie is so smart. Jo is my hero. Bette knows it time to start living her life again. Lets talk about Quin,that is a No No. She will find the right woman,it just wasn’t Tina. Oh,before I go to bed Gabe is so low the sewer runs over him. The sorry sucker. Thanks have a nice Sunday thanks bvh
Great update. It’s got it all…action, suspense, romance, and little of the otherworldly, too. You rock!
This is the ONLY story I read that Bette isn’t with Tina. I do hope Jo and Bette can have a happy ending.
that was great can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon
If this isn’t real fiction, then I don’t know what is. Like Bette, I too wonder where this leaves them all. So what’s up with Angie and her supernatural talents? So who will Bette move on to?