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“I have no doubt in my mind that you usually are,” said Natalie. Battling with the unknown emotions that were rising up inside of her, Natalie tried to take a step back, but almost tripped on one of the raised rows. Helping her get her balance, Alice pulled Natalie, who was barely an inch taller, closer to her. As their lips almost touched, Natalie whispered, “I really can’t do this.”
“You really can,” said Alice softly, the carrot falling to the earth. Alice eased up on her toes and let her lips graze Natalie’s, just as someone behind Natalie cleared their throat. Alice thought that someone, up above, didn’t want them kissing.
“Hate to interrupt,” said a very cold voiced, Spencer Wheaton.
“This is why I don’t have kids,” said Alice, ruefully. “…always interrupting when things get good, evening Spencer.”
Natalie turned on her heels, not able to meet Spencer’s gaze, “What is it?”
“My mom is on the phone and she wants to talk to you, I told her what you did, by the way, so be prepared,” chided Spencer. Jo hadn’t said much, only that she needed to talk to Natalie, and she hadn’t voiced an opinion about Riley’s room change.
Natalie walked by her, quickly jogging back to the main section of the castle, “Do you always give her a hard time like that?” Alice asked Spencer.
“Yes, my lot in life is to drive her insane. Were you just about to kiss her?” asked Spencer, looking at the castle, then back to Alice in wonderment.
“None of your goddamn business,” snapped Alice. “You know, she adores you, and every time you rip her a new one she feels it and it hurts her. She cares about you, and you don’t care, do you? She raged into the apartment and was about to hand Quin a slice of a beating, because she thought that you and Quin had done something. She loves you. You should know that she loves you like a mother, but maybe even more so, because she chooses to love you, mother’s love because they are your mothers. She loves you even more than that. You think threatening her is going to make her think you are mature enough to handle having your girlfriend in the same room as you? Damn, I thought you would be a little smarter than that, Spencer,” said Alice, in a very motherly tone.
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Well, for once, insomnia has led to something good. Welcome back! That was some really smokin build up with Natalie and Al, loved it. I liked Alice sticking up for her… (girl?)friend with Spencer. And I see Tina is jealous, too bad. If she snoozes, she’ll lose… again. She’s lost Quin for good, and Bette is moving on. Glad you had fun, JM, and good luck with the new job. Thanks for the chapter, cheers!
Spencer is a brat. Love Natalie and Alice that was cute and now sexy At least Alice got her in bed. Tina is jealous,but Bette is not moving on from Tina. Just trying to keep from running to Tina. Just some wee baby steps. Glad you enjoyed your vacation. Must have done you a world of good. Your writing is smooth in this chapter. Was going to say sweet,do you do sweet? Good lucky with your new job. Thanks for no mass killing and Alice might have found the love of her life. thanks bvh
Wow…dare I hope for a B&T reunion??? Cute interactions between Alice & Nat and nice touch helping Tina/Quin come full circle with their relationship. Great anecdote chapter to your others =) and did I read it right? you’re going to continue with Le Bandwagon??? Sweet, it must be your new job that inspire or made you do it…lol, good luck and thanks.
I soooo need your energy, what with the new job & all, congrats to that. Natalie & Alice were very cute together. Glad to see Natalie was just doubtful & not purposely misleading. With all the things that Spencer has faced, I tend to forget that she is a teenager prone to bitchy, childish behavior, luv what Alice had to say to her. Angelica makes me laugh, I can just picture the attitude that a child that age can give. Loved it.
Awfully calm in this chapter. Eye of the storm? Or is the joke on us–no more twists and turns–which would be the biggest twist of all!!!!
Okay, Bettyvhall just said everything I was going to! Spencer is a brat, and Alice shows a glimpse of her Yoda side, and then switches right into her sexy side! Natalie is cute when she is nervous. Tina is jealous…Bette does want Tina (in my opinion) but is stopping herself from jumping right back into it. Maybe because there is a part of her that is still in love with Jo, she doesn’t want Tina to only get a part of her heart. Yet, I think there is a part of Bette that is still in love with Tina. Besides, Bette should know that when she loves, she loves completely…not part-ways. What a nice surprise to wake up to this! Thanks!!
I love alice and natalie as for bette and tina whats going on there can’t wait to find out please post soon I love this story so much great update
Hey JM, “lighthearted is moi”… not the first descriptive word that comes to mind, but I like that you are keeping up your giggle factor…too cute! Gotta love the Alice. Setting Tina straight, setting Spencer straight, and then making sure Natalie wasn’t too straight. Great chapter, even the continued B&T teasing. Today is Friday so I am anxiously awaiting your juicy morsel!
JM so glad you finally got Alice and Natalie together. Funny you had Alice remember everything. So dense Bette is! Well lets see how Bette date goes with this “new” addition to the story. Doesn’t Bette and Tina notice that their daughters conversation is a little mature considering her age?