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Spencer’s face screwed up oddly, “You are so….”
“Stop being a teenager, shut up and just stop,” shot back Alice, enraged by the way that Natalie was being treated. “Go back in that house and apologize to her for being a little bitch, and don’t do it because I told you, do it because deep down, you really mean it.”
Spencer opened her mouth to say something, but nothing came out, instead she turned and stomped her way back to the house.
Alice bent over, picked up the carrot, brushed off the dirt and walked over to one of the granite benches that she’d caught a glimpse of when she and Natalie had been walking to the garden. Sitting down on the cool stone bench, Alice crossed her legs and looked up, realizing that she could see the stars really well from the secluded island.
Alice used the tail of her shirt to rub the dirt off the carrot and then bit into it. She leaned back and relaxed, time drifted slowly by, but Alice didn’t mind. It gave her a few minutes to contemplate if Natalie was really gay, or just playing at it, you could tell with some women. Natalie was a mystery that’s for sure.
“I’d love to know what you said to her, but I think I’ll let it be an ambiguity that shouldn’t be revealed to me,” said Natalie, sliding next to Alice. “She actually said the words ‘I’m sorry’, albeit in Gaelic, but she said it, none the less.”
“I’m glad she did,” smiled Alice. “I have a mother who is, well… she’s way out there, but I’d treat her better than how she was treating you.”
“I’m not her mother,” said Natalie, mimicking Alice’s pose, staring up at the sky, all she was missing was the carrot which was dangling from Alice’s lips.
“But you helped raise her, I got that much, and you care a lot for her, otherwise tears wouldn’t spring up in your eyes, for no reason, every time she gives you shit. I thought she needed a few words to put her in order,” said Alice, dreamily. “That and she interrupted me, right as I was about to get that much sought after kiss.”
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Well, for once, insomnia has led to something good. Welcome back! That was some really smokin build up with Natalie and Al, loved it. I liked Alice sticking up for her… (girl?)friend with Spencer. And I see Tina is jealous, too bad. If she snoozes, she’ll lose… again. She’s lost Quin for good, and Bette is moving on. Glad you had fun, JM, and good luck with the new job. Thanks for the chapter, cheers!
Spencer is a brat. Love Natalie and Alice that was cute and now sexy At least Alice got her in bed. Tina is jealous,but Bette is not moving on from Tina. Just trying to keep from running to Tina. Just some wee baby steps. Glad you enjoyed your vacation. Must have done you a world of good. Your writing is smooth in this chapter. Was going to say sweet,do you do sweet? Good lucky with your new job. Thanks for no mass killing and Alice might have found the love of her life. thanks bvh
Wow…dare I hope for a B&T reunion??? Cute interactions between Alice & Nat and nice touch helping Tina/Quin come full circle with their relationship. Great anecdote chapter to your others =) and did I read it right? you’re going to continue with Le Bandwagon??? Sweet, it must be your new job that inspire or made you do it…lol, good luck and thanks.
I soooo need your energy, what with the new job & all, congrats to that. Natalie & Alice were very cute together. Glad to see Natalie was just doubtful & not purposely misleading. With all the things that Spencer has faced, I tend to forget that she is a teenager prone to bitchy, childish behavior, luv what Alice had to say to her. Angelica makes me laugh, I can just picture the attitude that a child that age can give. Loved it.
Awfully calm in this chapter. Eye of the storm? Or is the joke on us–no more twists and turns–which would be the biggest twist of all!!!!
Okay, Bettyvhall just said everything I was going to! Spencer is a brat, and Alice shows a glimpse of her Yoda side, and then switches right into her sexy side! Natalie is cute when she is nervous. Tina is jealous…Bette does want Tina (in my opinion) but is stopping herself from jumping right back into it. Maybe because there is a part of her that is still in love with Jo, she doesn’t want Tina to only get a part of her heart. Yet, I think there is a part of Bette that is still in love with Tina. Besides, Bette should know that when she loves, she loves completely…not part-ways. What a nice surprise to wake up to this! Thanks!!
I love alice and natalie as for bette and tina whats going on there can’t wait to find out please post soon I love this story so much great update
Hey JM, “lighthearted is moi”… not the first descriptive word that comes to mind, but I like that you are keeping up your giggle factor…too cute! Gotta love the Alice. Setting Tina straight, setting Spencer straight, and then making sure Natalie wasn’t too straight. Great chapter, even the continued B&T teasing. Today is Friday so I am anxiously awaiting your juicy morsel!
JM so glad you finally got Alice and Natalie together. Funny you had Alice remember everything. So dense Bette is! Well lets see how Bette date goes with this “new” addition to the story. Doesn’t Bette and Tina notice that their daughters conversation is a little mature considering her age?