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Come Away with Me
“Ok so what are we going to do does anybody have a plan yet”
Carmen asks
“Not yet” says Shane
“Well I think you guys need to talk this out but I think you need a little romance just to lighten the load a little,” says Carmen
“Ok am all ears.” Says Dana.
“Well what about we get your deck by the pool all lit up with some candles and fairy light and you guys just have dinner and a nice evening together to talk surprise her me and Jenny will go over to her place get her to dress nice and drag her over here you will have to call her first tell her you want her to come over that you want to see her”
“It sounds great one problem though I can only cook pancakes and eggs”
“Well leave the cooking to me and Jenny and you and Shane can fix up the Deck and all the other little things.” “Now what do you guys eat so me and jenny can go to the store and get some groceries”
“Err anything you chose I trust you to make a good choice, can you pick up some more candles while your out as well I don’t have that many I figured would but some in the bedroom as well”
Dana hands Carmen some money from her purse.
“Ok sure and call her you don’t want to leave her thinking too long ok?”
“Ok I will do I now See you guys in a bit”
Jenny and Carmen leave for the store Shane is out side on the deck trying to figure out how to lay it out were the table should be and were to put the candles and lights. While Dana was in side waiting for Alice to pick up the phone.
“Hey.”
“Hey baby you ok?”
“Yeah am fine I was just taking a nap what up?”
“Aww am sorry hon. I didn’t mean to wake you. I was just thinking why don’t you come over tonight I have a surprise for you”
“Oh really what kind of surprise?”
“Well if I told you it wouldn’t be a surprise would it silly, but I can tell you that it is a good kind of surprise.”
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(47 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
phucking beautiful story!!!! Keep up the great work !!!
Hey I like this. Waiting your next post. Thanks.
nice job! the reading is a little tough because it all runs together when you post it– but it’s worth the trouble! keep it up!
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Thank you after a long day this was a wonderfully long story to brighten it. Please do this again
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