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Come Away with Me
“Ok well I like good surprises”
“I want you to dress nice ok and Carmen will be there to pick you up around seven ok sweetie”
“Why is Carmen picking me up I can just drive my self.”
“No Carmen is picking you up and don’t worry she is not staying for the surprise she is just helping me out. I have to go and get everything ready now ok I will see you in couple of hours ok baby I can’t wait to see you.”
“I must say Dane you have me very interested and a little apprehensive too why do you want me to dress up?”
“Well both of those things are good they make the surprise better and if I tell you why I want you to dress up it will give away that surprise so put your busy little journalist head back down on the pillow for another hour or so then get up get showered and make your self look more perfect than you already do if it is possible and be ready for Carmen to pick you up at seven ok baby?”
“Ok whatever you say but I wont be able to sleep very much you know?”
“Well I would try because if I have my way tonight you wont be sleeping at all this evening.”
“Is that so well this surprise you have planned just keeps getting more and more interesting.”
“Well I have to go to make things ready I don’t want to disappoint you now do I?”
“Ok well I will see you in a few hours baby.”
“Yes you will ok then bye baby.”
“Bye.”
“Oh Al wait.”
“What, what’s wrong?”
“I love you.”
Before Alice could say anything back Dana had hung up the phone.
Dana walked out of the condo and onto the deck were Shane had cleared everything away so they could lay it out the way they wanted it.
“So Dane what did she say?”
“She will be ready for seven for Carmen to pick her up”
“Well that gives us five hours to get this place and you ready, that should be plenty of time.”
“I just feel like I haven’t gone big enough with this I mean I know Alice will love it but I want her to be amazed stunned you know do something that know one has ever done for her before.”
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(47 votes, average: 3.30 out of 5)
phucking beautiful story!!!! Keep up the great work !!!
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nice job! the reading is a little tough because it all runs together when you post it– but it’s worth the trouble! keep it up!
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Thank you after a long day this was a wonderfully long story to brighten it. Please do this again
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