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Come Away with Me
“Shore thing Dane’s.”
“Jesus what got in to her?”
“I don’t know Carmen but I think she is taking this surprise to the extreme.”
Inside the condo Dana had just gotten of the phone to her manager and started to do her little dance again she managed get him to agree to having two weeks off by telling that she had just been asked to do an interview with L.A magazine when she gets back her manager agreed and told Dana that she would let her coach know and considering the tennis season had finished few weeks ago told her to take two week because she could do with a break. After Dana finished doing her little dance she called the airline.
Carmen and jenny made there way to the kitchen and set up the groceries so they could prepare the food for this evening they also picked up some salads for lunch. While Carmen was sorting out the groceries Jenny set up for lunch they got something light because they didn’t want Dana to be too full this evening considering they bought enough for a banquet for about six and there was only going to two people.
Dana went back outside and started moving the table around with Shane telling her exactly what she had planned Shane was stunned that Dana would go to all that trouble.
“You really do love her don’t you?”
“Are you kidding I don’t know what I would do if I ever lost her it is just a shame I had to hurt her to realize how much I love her but I am going to spend the rest of my life showing her how much I love her and need her.”
Carmen and Jenny had come out onto the deck with dinner and drinks and heard what Dana and Shane where talking about.
“Well amen to that, I didn’t know you had it in you Fairbanks. But I hope some feels like that about me one day.”
“They will Jenny I just hope doesn’t take you as long as it took me to know who it is.”
“Ok lets eat we need to build your strength for this evening and the next two weeks don’t we.”
It was six thirty and Alice was just doing her hair when her phone rang she checked the caller I.D and sore that it was Carmen.
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