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Coming Back – Chapter 14
Carmen : I don’t know if I even ever want to ear all your explanations.
Shane : Please, I really wanna talk to you.
Carmen : Meet me outside in 15-20 minutes.
Shane : (smiling) Perfect.
Shane leave the office and walks to the bar. One of the chicks that she had already spotted walks towards her. She sits right next to Shane’s side. She’s wearing a short black skirt, with a red and black tank top and some 14 holes electric green “Docs”.
Sarah : (smiling) Hi.
Shane : (smiling) Hi.
Sarah : I never saw you here before, is it the first time you come here ?
Shane : Yeah.
Sarah : You’ll see it’s a really nice place, and the new DJ is really cute and good.
Shane : I know.
Sarah : Hurmm.. I’m Sarah, by the way.
Shane : Shane, nice to meet you.
Sarah : Can I offer you a drink, or a dance.
Shane : I’m actually waiting for someone, but after, it’s gonna be with pleasure.
Sarah : I’ll wait for your call, just pass by that corner. (she point a small place with some sofas)
Shane : Perfect, see you then.
Sarah leaves Shane at the bar and walks to the sofas. She starts talking with some of her friends. Carmen, on her side, is watching all the scene with big interest. She looks more and more upset. Even if she’s not with Shane anymore technically, she still loves her very much.
At midnight, a guy comes to replace Carmen for her break. Carmen leaves the office and walks by the bar, but Shane is not there anymore. She walks outside and finds Shane sitting on the edge of the sidewalk. She sits beside Shane.
Carmen : Hey.
Shane : Hey. How are you ?
Carmen : I’m fine, thanks. You ?
Shane : I’m good, considering everything, I’m good.
Carmen : Why are you here for ?
Shane : You.. us.
Carmen : (sadly) There’s no “us” anymore.
Shane : It’s why I’m here I want a “us” again.
Carmen : Sorry, but no big chance.
Shane : Why ? I mean I love you and for as far as I know you love me too.
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I´m always looking foward for your storys and I always know that they are so great and you never dissapoint me. Great update!!!
I read it again, and I actually like shanes situation (I´m totally into drama) and I really like how you discribe the wohle situation between shane and carmen. And it´s good to see that you don´t let shane and carmen find back together so easily, because Carmen never knew how shane really was (her bad side of live) and she sould know this before they maybe find back together. (sorry, if there are any language mistakes but I´m not living in an english speaking country)
OH fuck…Now thats a burn..Poor Carmen..Post s0oN..
I love this new direction that your story took, I hope that Shane will be able to recover from her losts… Go on!
Yes, I still like your story. You are a wonderful writer. I do hope that Shane and Carmen can work things out and maybe get back together;although Carmen has every right to her feelings. I’m keeping those puffs handy. See you back here in a grip….