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Coming Back – Chapter 14
Carmen : Yeah, but you hurt me a lot.
Shane : It’s also why I’m here to beg you for pardon.
Carmen : (feeling that something is wrong with Shane) What’s wrong with you ?
Shane : Sorry ?
Carmen : Yeah. What’s wrong with you I mean you never begged anyone for pardon, so I don’t know why you’re starting now. Are you stone or something ?
Shane : (trying not to look guilty) No..
Carmen : You sure? I mean, I never saw you like this before
Shane : I swear, I’m here for you.. I realized my mistakes and I’m here to beg your pardon.. Carmen.. I love you.. I really do.
Carmen : If you love me that much, can you explain me the fact that you were looking at girl in the club.
Shane : You saw us I mean, it’s nothing.. it’s her who came to me.
Carmen : Yeah whatever.
Carmen gets up and walks to the door. She walked two steps that Shane gets to her.
Shane : Please listen to me.
Carmen turns, her eyes are filling with tears. Shane grabs her on the hips. She gets Carmen closer to her. With her fingers, she wipes the tears on Carmen’s cheeks. Carmen closes her eyes, Shane gets closer and closer. They are now at one inch of each other. Shane puts her lips on Carmen’s. After a moment, Shane opens her mouth, and with her tongue, she draws Carmen’s lips. Shane’s hands travels on Carmen’s back slowly. Suddenly, Carmen stops and make a step backwards.
Carmen : I’m sorry, but I don’t want it to be that way.
As she says that, Carmen notice a little baggie where Shane were sitting the moment before.
Shane : Why ?(sadly)
Carmen : (changing subject) What’s that ?
Carmen gets the small baggie and looks at it. Shane is totally out of words.
Carmen : Cocaine!! What are you doing with cocaine ? No, actually I don’t want any answer. You told me that you’d stop that long time ago, as I can see that was an other lie.
Carmen walks into the club.
Shane : Carmen, stop please, I’d stop, it’s just I need that to get over all of this. I just got this today, please believe me. I won’t
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I´m always looking foward for your storys and I always know that they are so great and you never dissapoint me. Great update!!!
I read it again, and I actually like shanes situation (I´m totally into drama) and I really like how you discribe the wohle situation between shane and carmen. And it´s good to see that you don´t let shane and carmen find back together so easily, because Carmen never knew how shane really was (her bad side of live) and she sould know this before they maybe find back together. (sorry, if there are any language mistakes but I´m not living in an english speaking country)
OH fuck…Now thats a burn..Poor Carmen..Post s0oN..
I love this new direction that your story took, I hope that Shane will be able to recover from her losts… Go on!
Yes, I still like your story. You are a wonderful writer. I do hope that Shane and Carmen can work things out and maybe get back together;although Carmen has every right to her feelings. I’m keeping those puffs handy. See you back here in a grip….