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Coming Back – Chapter 14
Carmen gets in the club going back to work. Shane realize that now everything is messed up with Carmen. Shane gets back in the club, deciding that she still can have some fun, with that chick she met before. She walks by the bar, orders two beers and walks to the sofas where Sarah was. Seeing that Shane walks towards her, Sarah gets up as Shane arrives to her. Shane gives her one beer.
Sarah : So, you came back.
Shane : I told you.
Sarah : I see you’re offering me a drink, so can I offer you a dance ?
Shane : (smiling) Of course.
Shane and Sarah walks to the dance floor and starts dancing. At every beat of the song they get closer and closer. Shane is in total pleasure, the ecstasy pill helping of course. Shane passes her hands on Sarah’s hips, as Sarah passes her hands on Shane’s stomach.
In her office, Carmen is watching all the scene and gets more upset minutes after minutes.
Shane and Sarah continues those dances for about half an hour.
Sarah : (in Shane’s ear) Do.. you wanna walk me home.
Shane : (in Sarah’s ear) I’ll do better than that,.. I’ll drive you home.
Sarah : Sounds good.
Shane and Sarah walks out of the club. From her office, Carmen is watching, a tear falls on her cheek.
Outside the club, Shane and Sarah gets in Shane’s truck. Shane starts the trucks and leaves the parking.
SARAH’S APARTEMENT – NIGHT
Shane and Sarah are walking on the sidewalk towards Sarah’s apartment.
Shane : Sooo..
Sarah : So.. do you wanna come in for a last drink ?
Shane : Yeah, I’m always in for a last drink!
Sarah : (smiling) Cool!
Sarah and Shane gets into the building then in Sarah’s apartment. Sarah closes the door behind her. Sarah gets Shane’s trench-coat and puts it on a chair.
Sarah : May I offer you a beer, a coffee.. I mean whatever you want ?
Shane : I’ll take a just a glass of water if you don’t mind.
Sarah : Perfect Humm.. Do you want ice cubes in it ?
Shane : Yeah, please.
In the meantime that Sarah goes in the kitchen to get Shane’s glass of water, Shane’s looking at Sarah’s CD collection. In that collection, we can find a whole bunch of different stuff, there is some Pearl Jam, Radiohead, Placebo, Rufus Wainwright, Disturbed, Bob Marley everything for everyone. Shane stops on one particular CD. She takes the CD and looks at the huge sound system.
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I´m always looking foward for your storys and I always know that they are so great and you never dissapoint me. Great update!!!
I read it again, and I actually like shanes situation (I´m totally into drama) and I really like how you discribe the wohle situation between shane and carmen. And it´s good to see that you don´t let shane and carmen find back together so easily, because Carmen never knew how shane really was (her bad side of live) and she sould know this before they maybe find back together. (sorry, if there are any language mistakes but I´m not living in an english speaking country)
OH fuck…Now thats a burn..Poor Carmen..Post s0oN..
I love this new direction that your story took, I hope that Shane will be able to recover from her losts… Go on!
Yes, I still like your story. You are a wonderful writer. I do hope that Shane and Carmen can work things out and maybe get back together;although Carmen has every right to her feelings. I’m keeping those puffs handy. See you back here in a grip….