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Coming Back – Chapter 6
FLASHBACK NARRATED BY MARINA
Marina : We went in that beautiful Italian restaurant. (We can see a typical Italian restaurant with the italian flags on the front, a sympathetic valet opens Marina’s door, she gets out of the car, his assistant opens Jenny’s door and gets out of the car too. The valet leave with the car to park it. Jenny comes towards to Marina and they hold hands. They get in the restaurant.) The host places us at the nicest table, right by the window, so we can see the river. (We can see Marina and Jenny following the host between the tables all occupied by couples. A few seconds later the waiter comes with the menus and the wine card. Marina choose the wine, probably the most expensive on the card, and the server come back with it and glasses. Behind them, by the window, we can see a beautiful river with some small waterfall.) We take some wine, we talk that was wonderful, that was perfect. (We can see Marina and Jenny drinking some wine then talking. The waiter comes and serves them some beautiful plateful. They were still talking, they had so many things to talk about.) That was the perfect evening with the perfect person. After our diner, we went outside and take a walk on the side of the river, with the lamppost, that was like some fireworks. Everything we talk about was so passionate. (We can see them walking on the side of the river talking, laughing. On their eyes we can see the passion, the love. They hold their hands. For the first time since months, Jenny’s happy and it’s obvious.) After our walk we came back to take the car and going to The Planet, but as we were kissing before getting in the car, she fall. (We can see then walking and as they arrive in the parking they look in each other eyes and they kiss, a beautiful, passionate, powerful kiss; a perfect kiss for a perfect evening) I don’t know what happen
Alice : hum.. that so sweet..
Shane : (looking at Alice, upset) It’s not the point,.. (turning to Marina).. what did the doctor say ?
Marina : Nothing, they don’t know.
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I’m so happy that Jenny and Marina are together. I hope this is not a serious problem with Jenny’s health. Keep going.
WoW! Love really does hurt,huh? It’s so nice to finally see this most tender and humbling side of Marina, the real Marina. Oh my, our Shane really lost it there for a moment or two,but thank God that Marina and Carmen were there to pull her back. Hang on Jenny help is on the way.. Great chapter, please post again (SOON).
Please go on, I love the drama!