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Coming Back – Chapter 6
Carmen : Baby, please this is not the solution.
Shane is too upset, she doesn’t ear what Carmen just said.
Doctor : Miss, we are trying to find what she has, we’re running tests , but we don’t have the results yet.
Marina : Shane there’s nothing we can do now we can just wait.
Shane : Wait!! How can you just wait ? My bestfriend your.. your girlfriend is unconscious, they don’t know what she has, and you just want to wait. I’m sorry but I just can’t stay here and just wait.
Marina : I know but there is absolutely nothing we can do.
Doctor : Your friend is right Miss, we have to wait for the results, I’m very sorry.
Shane : (starts crying) We MUST do something. (she lets herself fall on her knees) We must.
Carmen takes Shane in her arms and cry with her. Marina can’t handle this situation and starts crying too.
Doctor : I’m sorry, but as soon as we have results we’ll keep you informed.
Marina : (crying) Thanks.
The doctor leaves, not without being scared by Shane’s behaviour, but he understands how it can be hard to see someone we like, love, being in an hospital without any reasons. Shane, Carmen and Marina are still crying in the corridor. After a couple of minutes they go back in Jenny’s room, they’d totally forgot that Alice and Dana where there.
Alice : What happened, have you seen someone ?
Carmen : We saw a doctor but they don’t know what she has.
Dana : (looking at Shane) Are you okay ?
Shane : No..
Dana looks sad, but understands why her friend is in pain. She knew that Shane and Jenny were close, and she’d probably do the same if something a similar situation happened to Alice.
Dana : (still looking at Shane) Have you notice that your knuckles are purple ?
Shane : What ?
Alice : Yeah, your knuckles.. they are purple.
Shane : Ohh..
Marina : Well she grabbed the doctor by the collar and put him straight into the wall so I guess that she hit the wall at the same time.
Dana & Alice : She what????? (surprise)
Carmen : (taking Shane’s hands in hers) You okay ?
Shane : Well now that I see them.. well.. MAN THAT HURTS!!!
Carmen : (looking sad, but now because of Shane’s bruises) Mmm.. baby. (she kisses Shane on her neck)
Shane : It’s gonna be okay
IN THE MEANTIME IN JENNY’S HEAD
Young Jenny starts to search for an exit once again. She’s running in the darkness, sometimes she violently hurts walls, but then keeps searching. She’s crying because she’s unable to find any exit, but also this place scares her. She falls on her knees, that are now all scratched, telling herself that there is no exit and that she’s stuck there for the rest of her life. Then, far away, but visible, she finally sees a white door, or something that looks like that. She starts running in that direction, but as she runs, the door still looks as far as it was the first time she saw it. As far as the door is, young Jenny keeps running. After running for about an hour, the door is now close to her. She comes slowly to the door, approaching her hand of the lock. She’s now at one inch of the lock, haft a inch, then the door disappears. “NNOOOOOOoooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
To Be Continued.
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I’m so happy that Jenny and Marina are together. I hope this is not a serious problem with Jenny’s health. Keep going.
WoW! Love really does hurt,huh? It’s so nice to finally see this most tender and humbling side of Marina, the real Marina. Oh my, our Shane really lost it there for a moment or two,but thank God that Marina and Carmen were there to pull her back. Hang on Jenny help is on the way.. Great chapter, please post again (SOON).
Please go on, I love the drama!