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Constellations: Chapter 12- Getting Worse
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Carmen: Shane?
No response. She cleared her throat and managed a weak cry.
Carmen: Shane?
Soon she saw her wife walk in, wiping her eyes and then wiping her hands on her jeans. Their eyes locked and Carmen instantly knew what had happened, she knew she had lost the baby. She started to cry as Shane made her way over to her and pulled her into an embrace. Carmen took hold of her for dear life and Shane explained everything to her, leaving out the part about Alex. That was too much for Carmen right now. They sat there and cried together for a good hour. When Carmen had calmed down a little, Shane told her about Alex being pregnant. Carmen clasped her hand to her mouth.
Carmen: Shane, she’s only 16.
Shane: I know and they’d give her the morning after pill but her condition is so severe.
Carmen started to really cry again.
Carmen: She took it all Shane, you should have seen her, how brave she was.
Carmen looked over to Alex for the first time and saw all the bandages.
Carmen: She took all the pain that was supposed to be for me. I tried to stop her, but she wouldn’t have it, the second one of them would come my way…
She sniffled as more tears came.
Carmen: She begged them to do it to her. She acted like she wanted it and the entire time, she didn’t cry, she didn’t let them know how bad they were hurting her; but I knew I saw it on her face, in her eyes, it was horrible. They stripped her down mentally, they stripped her down physically and they took her body and I had to watch it! That’s the worst feeling in the world, to see your child hurting and you can’t do anything about it.
Shane rubbed her back.
Carmen: If you wouldn’t have come and they kept going at that pace, she would have been dead in no time. They’d whip her and hit her like crazy. All she told me was to close my eyes. She told me to look away and not to worry. Shane, you’re the reason she’s gotten to be so strong and so brave and selfless.
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ALEX BABY!?!?!? ARGHHHHHH you make me mad but he ur stll amzing like this update so update fast PLEASE!!!
THIS IS REALLY BAD FOR EVERYONE BUT i HOPE THAT ALEX WILL SEE THE LOVE THAT ALICE HAS FOR HER IN TIME BUT IT MAY TAKE A WHILE PLEASE POST SOON
hahaha!! everyone is soo into it lol !! and I KNOW whats going to happend i love to waatch them dangle by threads and get mad !! great writing babe!! xoxoxox
:( THIS IS SO SAD!! I REALLY HOPE EVERYTHING WORKS OUT FOR EVERYONE!!!
Ohhh my god that was sooo sad. everything better work out for everyone or i’ll…i don’t know what i’ll do but it better.
Damn…so fucken sad…They just have the worst luck EVER. I can’t believe Carmen lost the baby and Alex is having one. I have a few ideas about what’s going to happen but I’ll wait and see if any of them come true. Please bring them some happiness..all of them..soon. Update soon!
okay, first off, how do they know she’s pregnant so fast? and second, why would they make a decision on keeping a baby that was the product of rape without any kind of discussion whatsoever?
I agree with jp. Generally after a rape it takes a little longer to know that someone has concieved, no matter how hard they’re looking. However, as unbelievable as I’m feeling the story is, it’s still an awesome update. I love it! Even though I’m like bawling here about Carmen’s baby. I mean dude, I know what that feels like and to not be able to try again, that’s rough. I hope she’s able to stay strong for Alex. :)