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    Constellations: Chapter 13- Technology Sucks!

    Story written on July 21, 2006 by IAmAlexM.
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    Technology messed something up, but what? Will Alex ever let Alice back in?

     

    Alex: I’m not pregnant?

     

    Doctor: No.

     

    Alex: Are you kidding me?

     

    Doctor: Good news I guess.

     

    Alex: That’s the best news I’ve heard in ages! What about my Madre?

     

    Doctor: No, we made no mistake there, I’m sorry.

     

    Alex looked down and nodded.

     

    Doctor: Lets start shall we?

     

    Shane rubbed Carmen’s arm. She then looked up for a brief second and saw…Carmen’s mother. The short woman walked over to the two.

     

    Shane: Carmen, I think we have a visitor.

     

    Carmen looked up and saw her mother. She whipped her eyes and stood up as she ran to her. Mercedes saw the tears in her daughter’s eyes and knew something was really wrong. She pulled her into a hug. Carmen cried into her mother’s shoulder as she let herself be soothed.

     

    Carmen: Oh mom!

     

    Mercedes: Carmen, whats wrong?

     

    Carmen didn’t speak but Shane stood up and looked at her mother in-law, through her own tear stained face.

     

    Marcedes: Chaine! Tell me what is wrong with my baby?

     

    Shane walked up behind Carmen and put a strong hand on her shoulder. Carmen slowly pulled away from her mother and hiccupped a couple times through the tears.

     

    Carmen: Madre, we, we…

     

    She looked down, unable to finish. She hiccupped again before looking up at the ceiling and rubbing away a few tears.

     

    Carmen: We lost the baby.

     

    Mercedes put her hand to her chest in surprise.

     

    Mercedes: Oh my God, Carmen, Chaine I’m so sorry!

     

    Mercedes pulled Carmen back into a hug.

     

    Mercedes: How’s Aleihandra?

     

    Carmen: She’s doing alright, she’s in the room with the doctor now.

     

    Mercedes: Alice called me about an hour ago and told me what happened. I come here as soon as I can. Such a nice girl.

     

    The doctor stepped out and smiled.

     

    Doctor: Go on in now, but I’d like to talk to you two

     

    He pointed to Carmen and Shane. They nodded and Mercedes walked into Alex’s room. Shane put her arm around her wife.

     

    Doctor: I am terribly sorry but there was a mix-up yesterday. The ultrasound pictures with the baby weren’t Alex’s, the codes got switched. Alex’s isn’t pregnant.

     

    Carmen and Shane each let out a huge sigh of relief.

     

    Carmen: Oh thank god.

     

     

    Doctor: Once again, I’m so sorry. Any questions, you know where to find me.

     

    He then walked down the hallway and Carmen turned to Shane and put her head in her hands before resting it on Shane’s chest. Shane put and arm around her.

     

    Alex looked over at her Abuela, she was so happy to see her!

     

    Mercedes: Aleihandra, I have something for you.

     

    Mercedes opened her huge purse and pulled out a little case. She handed it to Alex who looked down and saw the new Gretzky 2006 game for PSP. She had wanted this forever.

     

    Alex: Oh, Gracias Abuela, this is awesome. Thank you so much!

     

    Mercedes: I thought you might like it. You and Chaine love those video games. Don’t tell your Madre, she’d kill me.

     

    Alex smiled and nodded.

     

    Alex: Thank you so much.

     

    Mercedes: Oh, no problema. So how are you feeling? Are you hungry?

     

    Alex: I’m good, and no Abuela, I just ate.

     

    Mercedes: You so skinny, just like your mother.

     

    Shane: No, she’s got more muscles than me.

     

    Alex smiled up at her parents who smiled back at her, she knew they had heard the news.

     

    Mercedes: When you get out of this hospital Alex, I throw a party. We get the whole family to celebrate!

     

    Alex: Abuela, I think that that’s the best thing I’ve heard all day!

     

    Mercedes smiled as did Alex, and Shane smiled over at Carmen who was resting on her shoulder.

     

     

     

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    1. I hope that alex will let alice back in soon because with everything that they have all been though because I don’t think that alice could take not being with alex please post soon so sad but so good great update

    3. Oh my god I thought for a second that there was a mix-up with Carmen’s baby too….oh so disappointed when there wasn’t……it’s just so sad….Hope they’ll all be alright though!

    5. awww see. THIS is what i like to see. good things happening. hopefully things get better and better and alex can work through everything. shane and carmen are so supportive. alex is not pregnant…there goes my theories! i hope she can work on things with alice..its really sad. update soon! this was great!

    7. As sad as it is, I kind of like that Alex won’t let Alice back in, I think it makes the story more believable. Now something I don’t get is why Shane didn’t deck the dr right there when he said he had mixed up the ultra sounds earlier. I’d be pissed! but also relieved I guess that Alex wasn’t pregnant. Awesome update!! Keep it up!

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