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Constellations: Chapter 14- Hallelujah! (Can be read as OneShot)
Chapter 14- Hallelujah!
Background info:
-Alex is Shane and Carmen’s 16 year old daughter. (Carmen’s Biological)
-Alex is closer to Shane than Carmen. (Carmen left them, then came back.)
-Alex used to date Jess until they broke up because Jess lied about many things. (broke up about a year ago, haven’t seen each other since.
-Alex is now dating Alice. (long story if u really wanna read it, read earlier chaps)
-Carmen lost a 3 month old fetus a month ago when her and Alex were kidnapped and Alex was raped. She also can no longer have kids.
-Alex pushed Alice away after the kidnapping.
Carmen: Alice, she said that she isn’t in the mood for visitors right now.
Alice: She doesn’t want to see me still?
Carmen heard Alice choke and knew the tears that were being shed on the other line.
Carmen: Alice, she’s just she’s still stuck in what happened.
Alice: Carmen I’ve gone a month without saying more to her than the quick hey and see ya later. I can’t take it anymore.
Carmen: I’m gonna talk to her. But Alice, you need to know what happened wasn’t quick or discreet.
Carmen let a single tear fall.
Carmen: I’ve never seen her so depressed before. It’s awful she won’t eat, she just sleeps all day. Shane’ll go in there from time to time and let her cry into her shoulder, I’ll bring her food and try and comfort her, but I find the full plates stashed in many places. She still even dreams about it. Alice, she’s practically two again, and a two year old who’s depressed is really odd.
Alice and Carmen each took a small chuckle. Shane came up behind Carmen after walking out of Alex room. She kissed the top of her wife’s head.
Carmen: Oh, hey. Alice hold on a sec.
Alice: Alright.
Carmen: What babe?
Shane: I need to talk to you, when you’re done.
Carmen: Okay.
Alice: Is that Shane?
Carmen: Yeah
Alice: Tell her I say hi
Carmen: Alice says hi.
Shane: HI ALICE!
They laughed.
Alice: I’ll let you two talk, but please try and talk to Alex, I don’t know how much longer I can take without at least being able to have a conversation with her.
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wow that was really, really great. for a second i thought alice was going to be standing behind jess seeing their kissing…but i’m glad she wasn’t. this was so perfect, i can’t wait for you to update!!!
this gets better with each post I love it please post soon I can’t wait to see what will happen next and I hope that you post again before I go on hoilday
Oh just love that song, it is sooo emotional and fits in perfectly it that amazing story of yours…=)
Pure sweetness . . . update soon which means NOW!!!!! LMFAO!!! And like always, LYLAS ;-D
Update soon im going through withdrawls its been a whole 24hrs
awsome stuff!! definitely didn’t see that jess thing coming!! and i know u way to well…remember!! Great Story!! Update soon ! lol hope Leisha calls ! Remember you get 10 hours with her lmao!! I love u babe! xoxoxoxGot a surprise on friday for you…dont make any plans!!
Hallelujah!
so when’s the baby coming…?
Ok litle do i care if you pulled an all nighter because of ur aunt or that your not writng or that you need your “beauty” sleep I jsut want my updates im getting mad i need sum kind of fix from you “alex” whether u cal me email me or update SOMETHING PLEASE 10hrs Because-ur-beautiful thats awful nice on ur behalf
I LOVED IT!! It’s great UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
Absolutely Amazing!!!…I really didnt see Shane getting pregnant but hey they need a baby around the house lol…Great story!!
It was a great chapter and i like the idea of Shane get pregnant lol it would be really interesting…i think she will go crazy but it will be adorable at the same time hehe Nice idea of Dana there with Alex watching over her and cool that Alice is back :D
Holy crap love it!!!!