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Constellations: Chapter 4- Pierced!
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Chapter 4- Pierced!
Alex walked out of her room, wearing her back pack and walked into her mom’s.
Shane: Hey kid, you all packed up?
Alex nodded.
Alex: I still can’t believe that you won an Olivia cruise for three for my birthday!
Shane: Pretty Sweet Sweet 16!
Alex: Fuck yes, An All chicks cruise to Europe.
Just then you hear a big bang. Shane and Alex turned to each other.
Together: Alice!
Alex walked out of her mom’s room and to the front door where Alice was trying to fit a huge suitcase through the door, while balancing the others on her wrists and under her arms. Alex quickly walked over to help.
Alice: Sorry ‘bout that!
Alex: No problem, we’re lucky you didn’t take a chunk out of the door frame.
Alice winced.
Alice: I might have.
Alex laughed and Shane walked out.
Shane: Alice! How nice of you to join us!
Alice looked over at the two other women who each had a back pack.
Alice: IS that all you’re bringing?
Shane nodded.
Alex: I’ve got a gym bag too, and my laptop bag but that’s it.
Alice looked down at her bags and looked up.
Alice: Maybe I over packed?
The three started to roar with laughter.
Alice: Okay, I’m stupid I get it now can we get to the airport?
The three grabbed their stuff and headed out the door.
Carmen sat at the table, eating when she realized that she had already had four bowls of cereal and was still hungry. She looked down at the small lump beginning to form on her stomach and groaned.
Carmen: Is this what it’s like to be fat?
She rubbed her stomach and frowned. She’d never been fat before and hated the feeling.
Alex walked onto the plane with Shane and Alice ahead of her. It wasn’t a big plane, there were two rows of two seats.
Shane: Alright, we’re next to each other, but one of us is in the second row, who wants to be it?
Alice: What seats do we have?
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I don’t mean to rag on you, because I love this story, but I’ve lived in Phoenix for half my life and no one has an accent unless they’re from out of town.
Please tell Carmen realize how dumb she was and go back to her family!!
Lovin it… Carmen needs get the commaon sense knock back into her…love the tatto thing… update soon want more plz!
As creepy as it is, I’m actually pulling for Alice and Alex. Maybe because Alex is so much like Shane, and I’m a HUGE Shalice shipper. Either way, post soon!
Hey, girl! I’m kinda new to the site, but just got super into your writings. I just had one quick comment about this one… It says that Carmen had never been fat before, but wasn’t she pregnant with Alex when she was younger? Just something that got a little confusing. Anyways, keep it up, these are great!Lizabeth
Stud-muffin… every time you put it in there i burst out laughing I love itGreat update!! Talk to me sometime today~!
Great as always…and I also like reading that Alice is around.post soon!
Ok, first time commenting although I’ve been reading your story since the beginning and really love them! I definitely think your writing style has improved slightly… I’m finding it flows slightly better now… (thats a compliment and not a criticism of the earlier Traced in the Stars!!). If I did have one tiny bit constructive feedback.. it’d be that sometimes I feel the story moves a little quickly and just as I was getting into a storyline it has moved on and I get a little sad as I was looking foward to it being developed… Hmm.. maybe others like the speed though as I must admit I do find some stories are a tad over descriptive and drag out…But otherwise – love it! And the speed of your updates is amazing!!
i agree with poopy on this one, Alex and Alice! Update soon!