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Constellations: Chapter 4- Pierced!
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Shane pointed to two empty ones, then one next to a red head.
Alex: I’ll take the single seat!
Shane: Settled.
Alex put her stuff In the above compartment, then held out her hand to the red head.
Alex: Hi, I’m Alex.
Michelle: I’m Michelle.
Alex took a seat next to her, trying to ignore her apparent beauty. But noticed the magazine she was reading. She saw the ad on the back and remembered the photo shoot she had done. The picture was her putting up a three pointer wearing ChicksLine sneakers and jersey.
Alex: What you reading?
Michelle: Teen People.
Alex noticed the accent.
Alex: Where you from?
Michelle: Phoenix. I was in California visiting some friends. Are you going home?
Alex: No, I’m from LA, we’re headed to Florida to catch a cruise.
Michelle: Yeah, isn’t that the second stop?
Alex nodded.
Michelle: Where in LA do you live?
Alex: West Hollywood.
Michelle: Oh, my friends took me to this nice little café they have there it’s called The Planet or something.
Alex: Yeah, I know that place.
Michelle: They had great coffee. So are you alone?
Alex: No, I’m with my mom and my friend Alice.
Alex pointed over to the two women talking.
Michelle: Your dad’s pretty good looking.
Alex: That’s my mom.
Michelle: Ohm either way, you apparently got her good looks.
Alex: Thanks.
Michelle blushed.
Michelle: So what school do you go to?
Alex: Universal High
Michelle: You’re in high school?
Alex: Grade 10
Michelle: I thought you were in University!
Alex: So I’m guessing you are?
Michelle: U of P. Sophomore!
Alex: I see.
Michelle: So, you got a girlfriend?
Alex shook her head no.
Michelle: Why not? A cute guy like you should have no trouble.
Alex laughed.
Alex: Well, I don’t. What about you, got a girlfriend?
Michelle laughed.
Michelle: No, that’s disgusting! But I don’t have a boyfriend
Alex: Why not? You seem like a nice enough chick. God knows you’re good-looking enough.
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I don’t mean to rag on you, because I love this story, but I’ve lived in Phoenix for half my life and no one has an accent unless they’re from out of town.
Please tell Carmen realize how dumb she was and go back to her family!!
Lovin it… Carmen needs get the commaon sense knock back into her…love the tatto thing… update soon want more plz!
As creepy as it is, I’m actually pulling for Alice and Alex. Maybe because Alex is so much like Shane, and I’m a HUGE Shalice shipper. Either way, post soon!
Hey, girl! I’m kinda new to the site, but just got super into your writings. I just had one quick comment about this one… It says that Carmen had never been fat before, but wasn’t she pregnant with Alex when she was younger? Just something that got a little confusing. Anyways, keep it up, these are great!Lizabeth
Stud-muffin… every time you put it in there i burst out laughing I love itGreat update!! Talk to me sometime today~!
Great as always…and I also like reading that Alice is around.post soon!
Ok, first time commenting although I’ve been reading your story since the beginning and really love them! I definitely think your writing style has improved slightly… I’m finding it flows slightly better now… (thats a compliment and not a criticism of the earlier Traced in the Stars!!). If I did have one tiny bit constructive feedback.. it’d be that sometimes I feel the story moves a little quickly and just as I was getting into a storyline it has moved on and I get a little sad as I was looking foward to it being developed… Hmm.. maybe others like the speed though as I must admit I do find some stories are a tad over descriptive and drag out…But otherwise – love it! And the speed of your updates is amazing!!
i agree with poopy on this one, Alex and Alice! Update soon!