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Constellations: Chapter 4- Pierced!
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Michelle blushed again.
Michelle: Well I haven’t met a guy who’s not looking for just another fuck yet. I need someone funny and sincere, someone like you.
Alex smiled, loving how her plan was working. Alice looked over at the two then turned to Shane.
Alice: Are they flirting?
Shane: Umm, yeah.
Shane took a sip of her coke.
Alice: I thought you gave that stuff up!
The two laughed.
Shane: Only the powder, not the soda!
Alice: Why are they still flirting?
Shane: Come on Alice, step down it’s not like you’ve got a claim on Alex.
Alice: But that girl’s like 6 years older than her!
Shane: You wanted to get with her and you’re 13 years older than her!
Alice looked at Michelle. They were now body against body. Alex smiled inside, thinking of how evilly genius this plan was. She leaned in and kissed Michelle. Alice looked over at the two, then at Shane. She tapped Alex on the shoulder. Alex groaned and let go of Michelle’s lips then turned to Alice.
Alex: What?
Alice: Can we switch seats?
Alex: Why?
Alice: That side is more wobbly and you’ve got a stronger stomach.
Alex look up at her pleadingly.
Alex: Alice, I’m busy.
Alice: I can see that but I’m sick. Can you please just switch seats with me?
Alex didn’t move. Alice tried picking her up.
Alice: Okay youngling, listen to your elders.
Alex groaned and reluctantly got up, taking Alice’s seat by the window. Shane looked over at her.
Alex: what?
Shane: Good score, definitely hot.
Alex: Until she was pried from under me. Does Alice like her or something?
Shane laughed.
Shane: No, Alice likes YOU.
Alex: What does that have to do with anything?
Shane laughed and finished off the Coke as Alex glanced over at Alice.
On the stop in Phoenix, Alex said goodbye to Michelle then re-joined the other two.
Shane: Okay Alice, do it now.
Alice came behind Alex and wrapped a blindfold around her eyes.
Alex: What the?
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I don’t mean to rag on you, because I love this story, but I’ve lived in Phoenix for half my life and no one has an accent unless they’re from out of town.
Please tell Carmen realize how dumb she was and go back to her family!!
Lovin it… Carmen needs get the commaon sense knock back into her…love the tatto thing… update soon want more plz!
As creepy as it is, I’m actually pulling for Alice and Alex. Maybe because Alex is so much like Shane, and I’m a HUGE Shalice shipper. Either way, post soon!
Hey, girl! I’m kinda new to the site, but just got super into your writings. I just had one quick comment about this one… It says that Carmen had never been fat before, but wasn’t she pregnant with Alex when she was younger? Just something that got a little confusing. Anyways, keep it up, these are great!Lizabeth
Stud-muffin… every time you put it in there i burst out laughing I love itGreat update!! Talk to me sometime today~!
Great as always…and I also like reading that Alice is around.post soon!
Ok, first time commenting although I’ve been reading your story since the beginning and really love them! I definitely think your writing style has improved slightly… I’m finding it flows slightly better now… (thats a compliment and not a criticism of the earlier Traced in the Stars!!). If I did have one tiny bit constructive feedback.. it’d be that sometimes I feel the story moves a little quickly and just as I was getting into a storyline it has moved on and I get a little sad as I was looking foward to it being developed… Hmm.. maybe others like the speed though as I must admit I do find some stories are a tad over descriptive and drag out…But otherwise – love it! And the speed of your updates is amazing!!
i agree with poopy on this one, Alex and Alice! Update soon!