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Countdown #13 – Touch Tones S07
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Sue Ellen smiles with a queer satisfaction, and slides her boot back on. ”So, what’s your story?”
I think Tina may still be speechless, so I begin. ”I only recently reunited with my mother. She spent most of my life in federal custody.”
”I know it’s hard on kids when their parents get locked up. Don’t think too much about it, Bette. I was in jail a few times, when Shane was little.”
”It was a long stretch,” I play along with her thinking my mother was in prison. ”I only recently caught up with her again.”
Tina pokes at her baked potato. ”Babe, I’ve been thinking some more about the rattlesnakes.” Then, her face freezes in shock.
”Look! At this nearly identical twin of yours we met in the Ladies Room!” Alice waves her arm by way of an elaborate introduction.
Shane notices Tina’s reactions, and begins tugging on Alice’s arm. ”Ah, Alice…”
Dead. Without feeling, ”Tina,” is all the sister says.
”Janet,” Tina says very cooly.
”Who’s this cause of such a stir?” Pipes in Sue Ellen.
Tina scoots her chair back from the table, and walks toward her sister, ”Our father said you lived here.”
”How is the old man?”
”No idea. He calls occasionally – on holidays.”
”Says he’s the Mayor of Yuma, Arizona, unless he’s lying.”
”That was more your thing, Janet.” Tina steps even closer to her.
”Or your imagination.” Janet doesn’t budge.
”So like you to twist things.” Tina spits back.
I point at Alice, ”We should get the check. Go get the waitress, Alice.”
”And miss this?” Alice refuses to move.
”What are they going on about?” Sue Ellen wonders.
”I’ll do it.” Shane offers. ”Come with me, Mom. Let’s get the bill.”
”Well, I don’t have any money.” Sue Ellen shouts, and stays put at the table.
”Nice company you keep,” Janet smirks.
Then, I step in and jab my finger in Janet’s face. ”You know, what? Fuck you! You owe your sister, at-the-very-least, an apology.”
”Who’s this?” Janet looks me up and down degradingly. ”I told her, it was you all along, and Mother should’ve punished you! Not me.”
Then, Tina slaps the shit out of Janet. Smack!
Followed by Janet’s strike back. Whack!
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Bette, one tough woman! Writing Tina’s name in stitches, i would love to see that!
To sad Janet didn’t get the kick in the ass she so deserved. I hope that she will be somebodies bitch in jail.
Loved the pictures!
Thanks for the update!
I’m thinking of a new story for my L Word inspired, Touch Tones, Season 7 storyline and Tina’s masturbation scene came to mind, “Date With Myself” ( https://lesfan.com/?p=85432 ) is a sexy story of Tina finding herself bored and lonely during the time she was away from Bette.
Following it is a very, very wonderful story, too, about Bette imagining her revenge on Jenny for writing such a revealing book about her and Tina. It’s a dark, but comical place Bette goes to as she climbs a tree and contemplates how to silence Jenny. That story is titled, “The Thirteenth Floor”, and is here on LesFan – https://lesfan.com/?p=85458.
Thank you so much for the updates, I cant wait for more . pps
TINA knew her sister was living in DALLAS but never thought or just did not want to see her that ALICE who has this perverted sense of not letting go of BETTE would find said sister and present her to them.Can you say smackdown,stabbing and plate throwing oh yeah the famous chokehold that ended real quick.Everyone has a horror story and thinking your mother is dead when she’s not,being molested by a sibling or losing your leg (how?)makes the pain in your head and heart pound but for BETTE/TINA its the pain in the loins that need and gets their immediate attention and with glowing results.pps thanks
Loving this quirky story. Thanks
Via Twitter to me from Lillian277=
Missed your talented writing besides the LWord ladies…lips of asbestos; such brilliant descriptive form…you’re back!! Brilliant writing on the boisterously disorderly frontier town brawl between Janet, Bette, & Tina. Everything’s perfect!
ssGogo – via email to me –
Hilarious! You have outdone yourself this time. This 3-part arc had me laughing throughout, but part 3 was absolutely, positively hysterical. Your writing just keeps getting better and better. Loved, loved, loved it!
Via email to me – CVU –
What a raucous scene?! I don’t know if I gonna laugh or what?
The scene is too unbelievable?! Of all places that Tina can meet her sister again.
It had to be on that bar? What are the odds? And not to mention the bloody encounter
between Bette and Janet, that almost end up in tragedy!
Way to go Blackbird!
Wow ! a lot of emotion in this chapter.
The entire constellation ..
Via email to me from Shaggy – Yep girl…this is really flowing…I remember somewhere that Tina HAD been w/ another woman—her sister.But she never told Bette,right?
That Cowboy STEAK restuarant/bar was perfecto…even the dang BLOODY steak gave me visuals!!!BUT the confrontation was “ghetto classic”lol!
Bette chokin Janet v& Tina kickin her BEHIND the knees made me think of my PuertoRican friend Liz, puttin grease on her face to fight a girl in NYC back in da day!!! Whoa da day! I’m really feeling it..the love scene esp nice&capturing,spicy. Sue Ellen keeps reminding me of DALLAS(old tv show)…until she took that boot off…ALICE’s reaction was a HOOT girl!!! You possess an expansive vision of experience & you know HOW to put it on paper—or in cyberspace. Some of your lines are just soooo GOT CHA&unexpected!THAT’S what makes em even MORE witty..you’re quick,very fluid…SoUNDS like you’ve travelled a lot
Wth is wrong with Tina’s sister? Stabbing someone is not a real sane thing do?!
What is problem anyway?! When she did that thing to Tina, did she gone insane for while?
MY GOD! TO DO THAT TO YOUR OWN SISTER. MUCH WORSE, TO YOUR YOUNGER SISTER!
Absolutely Great BB – so pleased to have your talented writing back :)
Look forward to reading more of your inventive wonderful stories soon :)