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“What? I can’t hear you!” Alice yelled.
“An ambulance is coming! I think you’ve gone partially deaf!” he presumably yelled back.
Alice was about to tell him she still couldn’t hear him when she caught a glance of herself in her car’s mirror. A bruise was forming around her eye. Blood was smeared across the bottom half of her face, some of it running into her scarf. Suddenly Alice felt really woozy. She forgot to keep exerting effort to stand up, and soon she was falling. Her eyes rolled back into her head, and Alice knew no more.
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“Yeah, no, sorry, we definitely can’t come. She’s in really bad shape. No, I have no idea. Okay, yeah… I’ll tell her. Bye.”
What was wrong? Who’s in bad shape? The car?
Oh right. The car. My car. I’m probably in bad shape.
Alice groaned. So stupid!
“Alice? Al? Are you awake?” Alice opened her eyes slowly and reluctantly. She was met with a very blurry blob hovering above her face. She squinted.
“Heey Dane,” Alice slurred.
“Oh my God, Al. You scared me so bad. What the hell happened?” Dana whispered, sitting down next to the bed.
“I don’t know. What did happen? I can’t remember a thing,” Alice croaked. She was lying, but she wanted to see how much Dana already knew.
“Well, I was at the club, and when I called you some cop answered. He said you’d crashed and fainted and had to be taken to the hospital,” Dana answered, tears in her eyes. “I was so scared!”
Alice tried to reach out and hold Dana’s hand. This made her yelp in pain. She looked down in surprise, and saw through the hospital gown that her right shoulder was strapped up. “Shit, shit, shit. I’m going to go broke after this. I can’t believe I crashed right before my radio gig too! Fuck!”
“It’s not your fault! I’m just glad you’re okay,” Dana murmured, opting to grab Alice’s left hand. She rubbed it in a soothing manner.
“I’m actually pretty sure it is my fault, but if that makes you feel better, I’ll go along with it,” Alice whispered, smiling weakly.
“Wait, I thought you didn’t remember anything,” Dana said suspiciously. She raised her eyebrows. “Al?”
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Yeah tunafish, fantastic opening! I like the idea of this story. The stuffed chicken was hilarious. A little sad that A got hurt. I hope she learned a lesson and wouldn’t smoke and drive again. lol. And A was her funny self when she was busted with her white lies. Excellent job on A’s insecurity. I can’t wait to find out D’s reaction to Lara’s reappearance. Thank you very much!
i would love to read this but the writing has come up really small on the first page if we can sort that out then I will read it
Love Ali’s you never loved me…Great storu Dana need to work on getting Dana back….As ,uch as I love Dana And Alice I think Dana need to be the one working on Getting Dana back..Love The update..
hey, great post! I really like the story like with the chicken :-pof course she will stay! it’s her soul mate Dana!pps..can’t wait to see how Alice tell about Lara, gossh, I hate this women….
She would stay damn it. Even though she things Alice is alittle crazy. She would stay. Stuffed talking chicken. Crazy Al. I love the story
New story? Yay! Love what Alice thought about Kit — that bothered me, too. Kids? Don’t smoke joints and drive. I hope Alice tells Dana immediately the next time she sees her. That was another thing that bothered me on the show. If Alice tells her before Dana sees Lara, then Dana at least has some time to process her feelings on the matter. I hope Dana has the fortitude to stay and fight for the relationship with Alice. Thanks, tunafish!!
I agree with them, a joint every now and then isn’t so bad, a little stupid when driving though but not break up material! I LOL’d at the chicken hehe, oh Alice. PPS
Love this story, crazy Al!! pps