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And cute too, Helena thought.
The music stopped and the dance floor emptied, almost as rapidly as it had filled, leaving the two of them sitting in the quiet again as the staff cleared up and the lights came on,
Bette smiled at the barmaid, using all her charm, “Any chance of another one?”
The young girl grinned back at her, “Sorry …”
Bette shrugged, “I don’t want to go home …” she said flatly, observing Helena’s response,
“Where do you want to go?”
“Dancing …”
Helena laughed, “Darling, earlier you said you ‘didn’t’ want to go dancing,” she paused, “now I feel sorry for those poor women, they missed out …”
Bette pushed Helena’s drink towards her, silently urging her to down it, “I changed my mind … you don’t have anywhere to be in the morning, do you?” Bette added with a tantalising smile,
Helena shook her head, swallowing large gulps of her drink as Bette looked on, she gasped, finished, “Nope …”
“Good” said Bette, “I need you to protect me …”
“Protect you?”
Bette grinned, “From TA’s who think I have nice arms …”
Helena followed along dutifully as Bette made strides in the direction of somewhere it seemed like she knew she was going. Helena watched her stride, strong and elegant, her long legs disappearing into the sexiest heels, Helena couldn’t tell if it was the mojito’s or the sight of Bette’s ass in those jeans that was making her head sway,
Bette slowed to allow her catch up, taking hold of her by the elbow, “Milk?”
Helena half shrugged, half nodded, it didn’t seem to matter, apparently … Bette was immune to alcohol,
Bette chuckled, “Are you alright?”
Helena nodded, allowing Bette take her by the arm and lead her on into the fresh nights air, everyone else who swarmed the streets was younger and yet all eyes were turned on the pair of dazzling brunettes that walked arm in arm along the sidewalk, purposefully in need of their night of abandon to last just a little while longer,
“Get some seats …” Bette instructed as they entered the club.
Helena walked like a young baby fawn towards an empty table, trying her best to make it look elegant, knowing that Bette was probably watching,
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Still love the cyclical motion, babe! Je adore, and you definitely deserve the nom.s! It’s been a pleasure, PinC, and you know I’m always reading… even if I’m a little behind. Moo x
wow…ok…wow…that was one of the best things i’ve ever read on this site. I’m going to have to re-read to get the full impact all over again, kinda like when you take one of those rides at a theme park and just haven’t had ENOUGH adreneline. you captured the total essence and hotness of helena/bette…how great they would be together if only…if only…fantastic sofa, just fantastic. smack on the behind for you!
That’s the sound of loud cheering frm the gallery. That was great. As the big H says it gets right to the heart of Helena/Bette. You really pulled out the stops. Major props.
what a great challenge, this was an awesome chapter, i luv both b&t, and b&h together, so this was a win, win for alot of us!!!!!!!!!
wow sofa this was really hot? i should have waited until tomorrow to read ths one cuz now i’m in trouble lol.Good job dear, really
These stories that are part of your challenges are amazing. This one is no different…DAMN WOMAN! Your writing is excellent…congrats on your nomination…it’s well deserved!
well done, this is the first Helena&Bette story where I am actually rooting for a happy ever after. It seems you are just getting better at writing by the minute. I am soo glad I dont do envy;-)
wow what can I say??? I hesitated u know cuz its HelBette but because it was you, and I so love your writing I could not deny myself the treat!!!! and treat it truly was….congrats on the noms, of course u so deserve ’em…now if u decided to continue this story, I think I could just bear to read more (lol)….as long as u write in a ‘happy’ tina with someone fabulous. Anywayz this story was magnificently written.
helena and bette!? so wrong .. but it just felt so right!! great offering.x.x.
I know you said a one time thing, but you did a excellent job with it. If you were to choose to continue it, it would be a great addition to the B&H saga. Thank you for taking this challenge you’ve done yourself proud.
OMG!!!WOW!!!!! Sofa that was HOT!!!! One of the best B&H stories I have read. Thanks
the end, what do you mean the end…you mean for today right…i’m a belena for life…and if you keep writing like that im gonna fall off my chair…that was HOTTTTTT…dang!!! would it be too much to ask you to post part II. Merci beaucoup!!!
see? you HAVE to do this again…cuz people liked it too much…and you’ve gotta do it for the PEOPLE! see? i told ya so. ok, another brilliant thing, and then I’ll write more brilliant things about this story later: is how you captured that ‘in the moment’ buzz that characterizes so much of what is perfect about this paring. they’re tooootally in the moment, not worried about baggage and nonsense. totally chill–you got that, which is itself, totally chill of you. ok, i’m going to sleep now and will rave about this more tomorrow. i’m gonna talk you into doing this again, i promise you that;)
Thank you for all the comments people have left, I wanted to reply here rather than in my next story, to sort of ‘book in’ and ‘book out’ the belena fic. I said I wouldn’t write another one, and I certainly won’t for a while, just because I have others already on the go and also exams coming up, but I wouldn’t rule it out in the future just on the basis of not wanting to write belena, it doesn’t flow as easily for me as writing tibette but then i suppose it isn’t always a bad thing to step out of your niche .. anyway, thank you for all the comments, well done to the other writers and i hope everyone enjoyed the challenge. Sofa xx
Sofa. You. Are. A. STAR!!! This was simply brilliant!! You’ve all done such a fantastic job with this challenge. I really really really hope you continue this, even if it is slightly lower on your list of things to do. Amazing, truly amazing! :D
Right. Okay. That was bloody fantastic, and this is only the first of the challenge stories that I’ve had a chance to read. I’m off to lunch now, I’ll get to the rest after. Fantastic. You deserve every single nom you got. Oh, and in case I forgot to mention it… this was fantastic! ;)
Well Sofa, welcome to the club!! This was great. I truely think you all did a great job with this challenge and a so pleased that i get doubly the fic since i like both BeLena AND TiBette!! maybe…you’ll continue??
Just wow.
Wow, that was… intense. Are you sure you’re still a Tibetter, Sofa ?… ‘Cause I’m starting to have doubts about that… Tina Who ? LOL !!! I mean, for a die-hard Tibetter, you have quite an imagination ! LMAO !Anyway, you are simply brilliant ! Oh, and the beginning of your story was absolutely hilarious ( I literally spilled out my tea laughing this time… And my laptop suffered from that “event”. LOL ! ). Really, it seems you have written BeLena stories all your life. In fact, I’m curious : how much research did you do about Helena exactly ? I’m sure it must have been a huge sacrifice for you, huh ? ! The things you do for the sake of art ! Hahaha ! But seriously, I’m very impressed. And as much as I know you must hate the mere idea of a Bette and Helena hook-up, I need to say that you seem soooo at ease with writing these two as a “couple”. But I guess that’s what they call true talent… Not to mention range. I loved this fic Sofa. That was really great. Thank you for sharing your gift with us.A littelz digression now : I made the exact same comment on NY’s fic, but I wanted to apologize to you for never having taken time to comment on your fic before. Believe me, I would have, it’s just that I only started reading your “Summer Vacation” about a month ago after someone told me how much they loved that story. Anyway, I would love for you to keep writing this Belena as well. Can I hope you would at least consider the idea ?
OK, you’ve convinced me. I’ll look for your stuff in the future.
Wow!! Absolutely amazing. I love how you took your time and lead through the whole story. I’m a Helebette fan, so I really loved this story. Very nice job.
Hey,, I’m new to your writing but I so love it. I’ve been reading Summer Vacation and others and I must say, I can’t get enough of them. I enjoy how you put your stories together and your character development as well. Kudos to you for a job well done! Thank you!