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Crossroads- Ch. 19
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Alice felt the familiar trill of longing at Lara’s words, and she gave in willingly. As they walked slowly down the hall to the bedroom, they continued to cast shy smiles at one another. At the foot of the bed, they stood, facing one another.
Lara smiled. "This is a little different, isn’t it?"
Alice nodded. She knew that Lara was referring to the almost frantic pace of their previous sexual encounters. Reaching down, she began to untie the oxford shirt that Lara was wearing snug to her hips. Lara closed her eyes, enjoying the sensation. Alice unbuttoned the shirt and reaching under, slid her hands up Lara’s side, allowing her thumbs to graze Lara’s nipples, and finally brought her hands to a rest on Lara’s shoulders.
At the contact to her breasts, Lara arched slightly and let out a quiet moan. She opened her eyes to find Alice looking at her.
Quietly, Alice replied to Lara’s earlier question. "This is going to be so much better." Alice rolled her hands over Lara’s shoulder and slowly peeled the oxford shirt off. Stretching up, she captured Lara’s mouth with her own, and let her hands come to a rest in the small of Lara’s back. She ran her right hand around the waistband of Lara’s jeans, feeling the woman arch again as her fingers found bare skin underneath the tight ribbed tank. With a slight twist Alice unbuttoned the jeans, and quickly unzipped them. Alice could feel the effects of her actions on Lara, as the redhead continued to moan and gasp throughout the kiss, which had become heated with desire. Lara’s tongue was beginning to frantically push into Alice’s mouth, and her right hand was snaking underneath the black shirt Alice was wearing.
Knowing that Lara’s cast could cause some difficulties, Alice stepped back and quickly pulled her shirt over her head. Lara’s head had snapped up at the sudden cessation of the kiss, but her eyes widened with appreciation as she saw Alice drop her shirt to the floor. She murmured, "God, you’re beautiful."
Alice smiled, and reached back and unhooked her own bra. She slowly let the straps fall down her arms and to the ground. She turned and with her back to Lara, unfastened her trousers and let them slide to the floor, revealing a black thong. She smiled as she heard the sharp intake of breath behind her. Turning she saw that Lara’s eyes had fixed on the thong. Patiently, she waited for Lara’s eyes to slowly work their way up her revealed body. She smiled when their eyes met. "I’m all yours babe."
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These two are just so… sweet, and I mean that in the most complimentary way possible. Lovely chapter. Ta, Goldrun.
Damn – I missed posting the first comment again! Well, what can I say, Gold? That was hot. And cute. And hot. And sweet. And… did I mention hot? :) The end was just completely perfect – “you’re here”. Awwwww… can I steal that line from you in my story? :) And, as far as “ignoring” Alice’s emotions – that’s hooey (yes, I did just use the word “hooey”)! You’ve given us fantastic insight into both Alice and Lara’s characters – and, if there has been more of an emphasis on Lara’s emotional turmoil over Dana’s death, it has never been to the detriment of Alice’s character. On the contrary, I think that has allowed for a really interesting exploration of Alice’s strengths – something that we don’t get to see often enough. So, thank you for this story, and for yet another terrific update! Epilogue away – and, feel very free to make it a 50-pager so that we can put off the end of this lovely story for as long as possible!
Right back at you with the ability to write hotness. In fact, I think it’s safe to say you put me to shame. And yay for making Dana’s only concern that Lara loves Alice the way she deserves to be loved. That was the subtext, right? Or I am just filling in what I want it to mean? Hey, it works for me. Ditto bluemini on the epilogue…remember Lucky started as one! Looking forward to next week!
Could it be that I have been rendered speechless? Gold, shit fire, this is…gaaaah! I echo jp22’s, Blue’s and SammysGirl’s comments: sweet, hot, and so well done. Sigh, touch-feely–erm, no wait, I don’t mean touchy-feely in a creepy way, I mean in a healthy adult way, both physically and emotionally. It just goes to show you can’t beat engaging in NC-17 scenes with someone you LURVE, hehe;) Or showing your lurve through said actions. Or, whatever. It was just the right thing. I thought for 1.5 seconds that Meg might interrupt them and was prepared to scream at the computer but you did not disappoint. I loved Alice’s “did you hear what -I- said” right back at Lara combined with Lara’s sincere gratification for Alice’s support…and finally, neither of them bolts off before saying what they needed to say. Yes! So now we are privy to their knowledge that they are together together, and that is just sa-weet. I like the image and symbolism of Dana walking away…can she rest easy now? As always, I anticipate with great fanfic crack addict desire how you will epilogue and/or last chapter this goodness. While the number 20 is an excellent rounding off point, don’t forget that ’25’ and ’30’ are also divisible by 5, just in case you go off on a sequel tangent. Hahah, laugh, dammit, I am funny! Ah, what can I say, this fic is deep-dish-dee-lish. Can’t wait for more when you can get to it!! Thanks for sharing your consistently delectable writing, your awesomely witty comments and…I’ll be checking back, don’t you worry now…!
oh alice…oh lara…you two are just…to perfect…man…sigh…okay enough with the …’s. anywho!! great update and i cant wait for more!
Damn, you’re updates were still faster than I could catch up. I hate it when work is kicking my ass. :( Oh no…the end is near! How about a 5 * 5. (25 is my lucky number….hint hint :P) But good thing you’re going to do an epilogue. I always love those. :D As for the last two chapters. Wow…that’s all I can say. So much unsolved emotions are still in the air. Lara’s fear for rejection once she confesses what really happens in her dreams (and ofcourse the fear for her own dreams). Alice for saying I love you, but still insecure about Lara’s feelings for her (she doesn’t need to be). But I’m glad they found a way to get some distraction…yeah that was one hot distraction. :P And they can always talk tomorrow…or the day after tomorrow…or the day after that. Because you can say one thing for sure, Alive isn’t going anywhere and so is Lara.:D Btw, did you vist last.fm already?
so maybe now lara has over come her nightmares I hope so and Ihope that they are on there way to being together forever please post soon great update I love it
hot! absolutly!! are you sure, there ist just only one chapter? there has to fallow an epilogue! for sure!and there is a new coupple? i hope, meg is involved lol ! she is so cute, i don´t want her to leave l.a.liebe gruesse,naren